The Gift of Insecurities

The gift was in a very huge package
Alluringly wrapped in the palest pink
Card attached was calligraphic in ink
Any gift from him was not average

When opened with much delight, the contents
Caused insecurities to tumble forth___
Joy? Fear of failure came from these presents
Taking out least feared __verse__William Wordsworth

The essence of the gift to him was good
The sum of the gift to her was fear
Excitement at this stage of life she could___
Not get a grip__on hold her life for years

Should she not fear but just try to use the gift
God had given her time now spared her life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:07 PM
William Worsworth? his poems are so cool. and insecurites are an issue.its reasonable to be that way when you begin with a person.but later if one still feels that way, there isn't a healthy bond there.thats a question, if they know one another at all.or if its the others fault for saying wrong things, and insults.like "you need a better dress" for example.it's just so messed up.i love your write, i enjoy pondering on your poems. -Always&Forever Lynette
Culverhouse Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:53 PM
enjoyed mom, very nice!! Hope you are having a good night I see you got back on the soup!!
A  Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 4:35 PM
I use to feel that way, hold on my husband would make me feel like that, I am over it . I enjoyed your write thanks ,,Irma
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April 23, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Intresting concept and a lovely poem...and maybe we could find a way to use our insecurities to better ourselves...Keep writing! -Destiny
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