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The Gift From Prison

On a pleasant Sunday morning, beside a river in a park, I went strolling in the city, in the dawn just after dark. Every bench; any haven, slept a host of homeless men, who have slipped through the cracks; society had failed again. I assumed there’s many reasons, why a man lives on the street, but strolling past the sleeping, means that I never get to meet, and get the opportunity, to sit down and hear a tale, from one of these down and outers, and what caused their life to fail. And then by chance upon one bench, I spied a man who sat upright; the collar of his coat turned up, his sunken eyes a gloomy sight. He hadn’t shaved for quite a while, and his clothes looked gravely worn - My chance to greet a homeless man, came on an early Sunday morn. I intended to ask questions, hoping he might tell his plights, about what put him on the streets, where he must spend his nights. And he was more than forthright, speaking of the reasons why, for once he claimed he had it all, then overnight it was goodbye. ‘Three weeks ago I had it all, a solid roof above my head. Three meals a day, and fresh clothes, no bills, no debt for me to dread. I studied on the Internet, and also there was Pay T.V. I also had a library, and was covered medically I felt sorry for this fellow, who claimed that once he had it all, so I asked him the obvious, what was the cause for him to fall. Was it drugs; divorce; alcohol, that finally took it’s toll? ‘No nothing like that’ he replied, ‘the prison granted my parole.’

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Date: 10/12/2020 11:37:00 AM
Lindsay, as usual you are completely on track with your punch line on the last line, this one made me laugh. A survey was done many years ago in Britain somewhere and a great many of these homeless people collected from the streets and for 6 months were given whatever their hearts desired, and then they were called in individually and asked do they want to go back to being homeless or remain as they had been for 6 months. The majority chose the former option! Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 10/14/2020 5:05:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... thank you once again for commenting. A story going around a few years ago was about pensioners breaking the law to go to prison for the benefits provided by the government. Like you wrote; many prefer to live on the streets - stay safe Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 9/29/2020 8:58:00 AM
Poor man. I'm glad you got to talk to someone like that. I hope he's doing ok. This is one of the best poems that I have ever read. I even understood it all. Keep writing, please. Saved to my faves to read again. Love, Angie
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Date: 9/30/2020 6:28:00 PM
Hello Angela ... what an encouraging, positive comment you posted. In fact I feel quite humbled by it - thank you so much Angela - Lindsay
Date: 9/21/2020 9:41:00 AM
ha ha ha love the twist at the end Lindsay , your poems never fail to make me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2020 6:25:00 PM
Hello Jan ... thanks once again Jan. Making each other smile is a great way I believe to give a bit of relief from the realities in life. By crikey, you've given me plenty to chuckle about too - stay safe up there Jan - Lindsay
Date: 9/18/2020 8:26:00 AM
hahaha. A classic. FAVE.
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Date: 9/18/2020 6:07:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... I'm pleased you got a kick out of this situation that unfortunately is close to reality - thanks Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 9/16/2020 1:28:00 AM
Hilarious. OK...I was all prepared for your usual end twist, but this one really took me by surprise!! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/18/2020 6:03:00 PM
Hello Paul ... I gathered you would be preparing for the twist, but I'm pleased that it surprised you Paul - Lindsay
Date: 9/13/2020 7:42:00 PM
Ha, ha! You really had me going, as usual, my friend. This is just hilarious. A FAVE, Lindsay. You done did 'out-dood' yourself this time! Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 9/18/2020 6:01:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... it's probably closer to the truth than we realize. Thanks for the FAV Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 9/11/2020 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for the laugh, Lindsay! Our government believes the best way to reduce COVID-19 in prisons is to release the prisoners! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/18/2020 5:59:00 PM
Crikey Rico ... I don't think the prisoners will be too happy about that - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 9/11/2020 9:33:00 AM
A great story as usual, Lindsay - the last line grabbed me! Take care, Mate!
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Date: 9/18/2020 5:57:00 PM
G'day Bob ... I trust that I haven't hinted that it's worthwhile robbing a bank - catch you soon Bob - Lindsay
Date: 9/10/2020 11:19:00 PM
Haha, brilliant Lindsay, wont be long before he's back inside. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2020 5:55:00 PM
G'day Tom ... there's rumblings from time to time how prisoners get treated better than pensioners - thanks again Tom - Lindsay

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