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The Gift

The Gift In colours rare a stunning shawl To drape her arms when breezes call Her lover’s gift of silken strands Was spun in oriental lands And secrets kept her heart in thrall ‘Til waxing cold his love grew small And slipped away like shifting sands Forgetting vow of wedding bands She sits alone by fireside flame The shawl, her link to way back when They both were young and passion high. In memories her pleasures lie. With closing eyes she plays the game Her love is here, and now is then.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/25/2010 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Margaret. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your work being featured this week.. It is just one page ahead of mine..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2010 11:01:00 PM
AWESOME! lainie
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Date: 1/16/2010 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful and a lovely Poem. Thanks With good wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 1/15/2010 5:38:00 PM
I love your awesome sonnet Margaret. Beautiful job. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/15/2010 3:49:00 PM
Your poetry made excellent reading today Margaret. Thank you for sharing. May you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2010 7:53:00 AM
YEAAAA , a SONNET here. A really well done sonnet with great meter. WELL DONE, Margaret. Do you have many more. I adore sonnets. So glad you liked MY hot little number. haha Luv, andrea ps this is in the contest, right?
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Date: 1/15/2010 7:44:00 AM
What a lovely, melancholy sonnet...with bittersweet memory! Well done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/15/2010 4:00:00 AM
Thanx Margaret for your everytime comments it realy motivates me especially that am still learning. i enjoy reading your poetry too you have talent and may God bless you with more talent!
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Date: 1/15/2010 2:49:00 AM
Hi Margaret, Oh how comforting it is when lost happy days can return to uplift a lonely heart from time to time. And a special object brings it all back. This is a very lovely sonnet. You talent is undeniably good. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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