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The Giant Family

This 14 letter word gets destroyed easily When you start ignoring the problems that you can see vividly Here's a story that I would like to tell There's little to say but much to tell Once there was a family who lived like happily ever after Whatever happened in the house was much more than a natural disaster Oldest member of the family was himself so biased He divided the family into three triads His better half was far better than him The noble soul departed for she has to pay for his sin Her departure unfolded the next page of the book Known faces now had the new look One of the triad was heavily threatened The biased man still stood there without any word unsaid I always do wonder that what he waited for He knew , even the sweetest fruit mango has some acid that makes it sour Excluded triad was left alone amidst the crowd The two's sinful words added black color to their shroud They were crushed, broken, trampled on the floor They still had their mast high , for they had not lost sight of the shore Every day was made so special with so many surprises They were always ready to cater to needs of their princesses Worked day and night to secure our future You don't know the plight, they always had their hands dipped in cold water Today it has turned from bad to worse The two's have decided to make it the worst After the juvenile has to come senescence All this happened because garden lacks the gardener's presence The gardener forcefully holds the wreath Yet he is aware that flowers have lost their breath All his efforts lie in vain Sky is all clear but I wonder why it still rains...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/23/2016 8:39:00 PM
Zeba, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/21/2016 3:14:00 AM
Greetings Zeba. Congrats for having your poem featured in the poetry soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Zeba Erum Ansari
Date: 1/21/2016 3:19:00 AM
thnx .....teddy for this warm welcome...to poetryclub.
Date: 1/20/2016 9:02:00 AM
Zeba, congratulations on having this wonderful poem selected as a Featured Poem for the week, enjoy the honor ~
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Zeba Erum Ansari
Date: 1/20/2016 9:41:00 AM
thnx a lot to all of them who appreciated my 1 st attempt.....

Book: Shattered Sighs