The Giant Animal

He stood before me, giant, brown and hairy,
this animal the biggest of them all!
I didn’t find him all that very scary
though next to me, he stood three times as tall! 

My father stood beside me with a look
of deep concern while holding high his gun.
One steady discharge. That was all it took!
My Dad had hit the target. We had won!

That final shot meant Dad had been the best.
The carnie sighed. I jumped around with glee,
then hugged that huge stuffed doggy to my chest,
but Daddy had to carry it for me!

Mom’s “no pet rule” I’d sure had too much of.
At last I had my own big dog to love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thirtyseven Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 12:03 PM
Ah, now that was a little easier to explain. Another fun read.
Austin Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:16 AM
Hi, Andrea. I'm a way behind. Computer has been a nightmare. My carrier, Charter, changed the internet and it was driving me wild, so I called the Geek Squad and the guy fixed me up with an internet that is the best ever. Love your poem about the big stuffed animal. Kids love 'em, adults too. Love, daver
Beaufort Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 6:28 PM
Living in a fantasy is sometimes necessary if reality is not as good as we need it to be. I find it constructive that you are able to think in this way even now. The child in you has not disappeared, and you are taking very good care of her!
Walker Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Good one, too bad it's not true. My husband when we were dating did a ring toss and won both times, so I carried 2 large tuxedo wearing bears for the rest of the date. It was fun.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:49 PM
haha. Only you among everyone here would know I made that up, especially the idea that our dad would have done something like this for us? What a fantasy I used to live in!
Callus Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:34 PM
Well done Andrea! Trust you to come out with this unique take! I love it:) // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 1:18 AM
A poem that many can identify Andrea. It was a very heartfelt write that reaches out to all ages. Bravo! 7
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 2:13 PM
a captivating poem Andrea hugs 7
Rv Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:16 AM
This is so so lovely, dear Andrea!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
Haight Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Very unique interpretation for the theme, Andrea! A great Sonnet -- all the best in the contest. Sandra
Inman Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:21 AM
Really cute.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:37 PM
Wonderfully done Andrea, loved to read the final two lines! Gl in contest!
Laurie Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Hello Andrea... a delightful twist. Do you still have this dog? Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 8:55 PM
I made the whole thing up. heehee
Muideen Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 4:59 PM
I enjoy reading this Andrea... A well and an eloquent write.......A.M.
Anish Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 3:02 PM
Interesting take on acarnival "happening"! Enjoy your stuffed dog and beware of bears - I have run into them in the woods and was quite scared! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Allison Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Oh a unique take on the theme I love it Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx
La France Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Andrea, " D E L I G H T F U L '' poem for the contest, really nice and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days . . . ~~
Konos Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Big 7.....on such a good one
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:25 AM
that's a good way to tell the story Andie.. =')!!! ~olive Eloisa hugs!
Crocker Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Very good!
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