The Giant Animal

He stood before me, giant, brown and hairy,
this animal the biggest of them all!
I didn’t find him all that very scary
though next to me, he stood three times as tall! 

My father stood beside me with a look
of deep concern while holding high his gun.
One steady discharge. That was all it took!
My Dad had hit the target. We had won!

That final shot meant Dad had been the best.
The carnie sighed. I jumped around with glee,
then hugged that huge stuffed doggy to my chest,
but Daddy had to carry it for me!

Mom’s “no pet rule” I’d sure had too much of.
At last I had my own big dog to love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/15/2015 12:03:00 PM
Ah, now that was a little easier to explain. Another fun read.
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Date: 9/15/2015 10:16:00 AM
Hi, Andrea. I'm a way behind. Computer has been a nightmare. My carrier, Charter, changed the internet and it was driving me wild, so I called the Geek Squad and the guy fixed me up with an internet that is the best ever. Love your poem about the big stuffed animal. Kids love 'em, adults too. Love, daver
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Date: 9/9/2015 6:28:00 PM
Living in a fantasy is sometimes necessary if reality is not as good as we need it to be. I find it constructive that you are able to think in this way even now. The child in you has not disappeared, and you are taking very good care of her!
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:23:00 PM
Good one, too bad it's not true. My husband when we were dating did a ring toss and won both times, so I carried 2 large tuxedo wearing bears for the rest of the date. It was fun.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/8/2015 11:49:00 PM
haha. Only you among everyone here would know I made that up, especially the idea that our dad would have done something like this for us? What a fantasy I used to live in!
Date: 9/5/2015 7:34:00 PM
Well done Andrea! Trust you to come out with this unique take! I love it:) // paul
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Date: 9/5/2015 1:18:00 AM
A poem that many can identify Andrea. It was a very heartfelt write that reaches out to all ages. Bravo! 7
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Date: 9/4/2015 2:13:00 PM
a captivating poem Andrea hugs 7
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Date: 9/4/2015 11:16:00 AM
This is so so lovely, dear Andrea!! All the best in the contest!! :D :D
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Date: 9/4/2015 9:05:00 AM
Very unique interpretation for the theme, Andrea! A great Sonnet -- all the best in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 9/4/2015 6:21:00 AM
Really cute.
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Date: 9/3/2015 11:37:00 PM
Wonderfully done Andrea, loved to read the final two lines! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/3/2015 8:53:00 PM
Hello Andrea... a delightful twist. Do you still have this dog? Lindsay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/3/2015 8:55:00 PM
I made the whole thing up. heehee
Date: 9/3/2015 4:59:00 PM
I enjoy reading this Andrea... A well and an eloquent write.......A.M.
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Date: 9/3/2015 3:02:00 PM
Interesting take on acarnival "happening"! Enjoy your stuffed dog and beware of bears - I have run into them in the woods and was quite scared! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/3/2015 11:18:00 AM
Oh a unique take on the theme I love it Andrea - good luck in the contest:-) hugs janxx
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:59:00 AM
Andrea, " D E L I G H T F U L '' poem for the contest, really nice and thanks for visiting my poem, dark days . . . ~~
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:44:00 AM
Big 7.....on such a good one
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:25:00 AM
that's a good way to tell the story Andie.. =')!!! ~olive Eloisa hugs!
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:10:00 AM
Very good!
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