The Ghost of Joy

Stay out of the past, I say,
  For its highways are cracked.
And its gardens are sere,
  So stop looking back.

Why seek to regain lost pleasures,
  To only find people as dust.
For all that was once hardened steel,
  Is now oxidized rust.

Looking back, for what I ask?
  At the skeleton of past hopes.
Which still linger within the mind,
  And occasionally moans and gropes.

Once a place of beautiful rivers,
  Replaced with stagnant slime.
Stay out of the past, I say;
  Stop wasting God given time!

The past’s fires have gone cold;
  Looking back, your future gets destroyed.
For when you look back to see a glimpse,
  All you see is the ghost of joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gass Avatar
December 11, 2008 at 6:10 AM
Sound advice, beautifully written. Perfect in form and great imagery. I am slowly getting through all of your work. You have so many. Thanks for the website so I can check it out. I know I have a number of poems that I say a lot of harsh things about myself and I appreciate that you (and some others) have read it. I wan to explain that it comes from years of (mostly) emotional abuse and I know God gave me the ability to create something out of my pain and to help me express myself. Love Robin
Neal Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 10:25 PM
This poem is so true and I can relate to it so much. I seem to catch myself looking over my shoulder at the ghost of joy.
Newell Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 7:13 AM
*EEKS* Forgot to say thank you for the welcome! Don't know if I'll stay; looking for a poetry home website where I can get serious critiquing and giving PS a try. Cheers!
Newell Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 6:50 AM
Nice piece of work. I'm intrigued by "sere" in line3 -- I can't find it in dictionary. It sounds like Latin -- meaning??? Grammatically, "a oxidized rust" should be "an oxidized ..." Stanza 4, line 1 -- "river's" should be "rivers" (not possessive). Also, try dropping all the "thats" and see if this doesn't become a tighter piece. Liked the content and melancholy tone.
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