The Ghost In My House

 
When Grandma died I inherited things, jewelry, dishes, furniture and a doll; I loved all 'cause I am a person who clings, the best was her rocking chair and shawl. It became clear that the chair had a ghost, you guessed it, Grandma had come along; but I did not mind and could see her almost, and often I heard her singing an old song. A friend who claims to see ghosts came to visit, walking around she stood by the chair; she was staring and I whispered can you see it, and turned to me saying there is a pair. A pair? Whatever do you mean dear friend, well, it seems your Grandma brought her cat; oh, do not be afraid as into your life they will blend, so, I have a ghost with a cat- wearing a hat ! __________________________ January 13, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/The Ghost in My House Copyright Protected, ID 01-1421-165-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, A Ghost Story sponsor, Angela Tune, Judged 01/13/2022 Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/13/2022 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful concept on ghost. It's very beautifully said in the last line. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:41:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/13/2022 6:46:00 PM
A loving pair of ghosts at that, even with a snowball cat!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:41:00 PM
Robert, thanks for the comment and yes, you remembered snowball the cat ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/13/2022 3:52:00 PM
Great! Love the story and the rhyme. well written.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:42:00 PM
Timothy, thanks so much for the visit and compliment, appreciate ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/13/2022 10:48:00 AM
What a warm and charming piece this is, and so masterfully written. Be well, Constance!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:43:00 PM
Thomas, thank you so much for the compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/13/2022 10:27:00 AM
Wonderful, Constance. Jerri had her favorite spots in our house, and she always brought along her dog. I do very much believe your Grandma was in that chair with her cat. How anyone can deny the reality and presence of spirits is beyond me!
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:45:00 PM
Milt, thanks for the visit and comment, oh yes Grandma and Snowball are here I am certain of that but I have no fear, I was very close to Grandma, she is the reason I am a writer, she would say "Write it, write it for the world to read" ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Date: 1/13/2022 3:15:00 AM
I love this, so well written, good luck in the contest.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2022 3:46:00 PM
Terry, thanks for the compliment and the encouragement ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad