Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

The Getaway

A
                                                        weekend
                                                       away with
                                                    you all my own
                                 to play in shadows on a stage of hearts...
                                                         Where
                                                       love spills
                                                      from a cup
                                                 of us with a taste
                               that streams inspiration that we drink slow...

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Matthew Anish March 3, 2012 at 7:41 PM Fine romanic imagery here. I like the line "to play in shadows on a stage of hearts" in particular. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2012 at 3:50 PM yes,this is really NICE. What a great final line it has too, Michael. So romantic.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 26, 2012 at 10:51 AM sounds extremely romantic to me Michael luv.. a tempting rendezvous with one so loved is dynamic chemistry in play .. enjoy luv .. a great form to express tender feelings ..JG.. feeling this one so deepl...xoxo..

Bl Devnath February 26, 2012 at 8:46 AM You are genius...... Sweet, honey...Loved your feeling of love, fantastic style. Enjoyed it with heart. We drink slowly... rightly penned. bl

Wilma Neels February 26, 2012 at 8:16 AM sounds like an awesome getaway, enjoyed this journey, err, I might just do that :) lol

Poet Destroyer A February 25, 2012 at 10:15 PM Michael, a wonderful week... you will take and steal... Me and Nathan, are having a wonderful week right now... but, word of advice... don't take your computer...lol..look at us.. we are both on our laptop right now... anyways..i'm sending mail....always..pd

Kevin Clark February 25, 2012 at 5:04 PM Wow such poetic words of love. Awesome

Lizzie Treetop February 25, 2012 at 4:05 PM Oh Michael what a romantic you are and how glorious for the wonderful lady by your side! Hugs Lizzie

Jslambert Mister Roboto February 25, 2012 at 3:52 PM nice siesta of a poem with shape and flavor. Oh, no worries on the piece, it is merely an expression of place in a far off cosmos. just art man. I am all good. :)

Carol Sunshine Brown February 25, 2012 at 9:52 AM You have Soupy Mail Michael

Sara Kendrick February 25, 2012 at 9:31 AM Very passionate and romantic work.Quite subtle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the uplifting comments on my work..Sara

Ilene Bauer February 25, 2012 at 9:07 AM very tender and touching! nice one!

Karen Croft February 25, 2012 at 8:36 AM very nicley put my friend:-)

Christopher Bunton February 25, 2012 at 8:27 AM Very Good!