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Written for My Aunt Louise, who loves Geraniums as much as I do.

The Geranium

Her soft pink petals are invitingly fresh and bright
Next to many others displayed in colors that delight
She sits and patiently awaits on greenhouse shelves
And prays she is soon chosen, as her heart swells

She smiles as the morning sunlight warms the air
As her earthy scent wafts and attracts with flair
Her magenta blooms are lightly covered in mist
Her petals stir, welcoming the moist dew kiss

She hopes the sweet geranium lady will soon be here
Then soon hears her voice as she's getting near
Her petals whimsically gleam as her growing stems invite
As she sits attentively waiting, feeling proud and sprite

She feels her pot lifted from the crowded greenhouse floor
Delighted she was chosen and excited for what's instore
Her feet are now planted at her new home in a beautiful pot
Displayed amongst her blooming friends in a bright cool spot
 
She smiles as the morning breeze tickles her new blooms
And her sweet lady admires her beauty and fresh perfumes
She vows to zealously grow, with her petals blooming strong
In hopes her blooms deliver delightful gifts all summer long
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 15, 2025 at 6:38 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous!! Amazing work. Always, Laura
Kitchin Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Laura, thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 4:23 AM
Dear Tania, Absolutely enchanting! The way you've captured the delicate hope and spirit of a flower waiting to be chosen is magical. I loved how your words breathe life into this little plant's journey, a tender narrative of anticipation and joy. Truly a lovely piece that makes a simple moment feel extraordinary! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Kitchin Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 8:45 AM
Daniel, thank you.
Read Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 11:06 AM
A beautiful poem about a beautiful flower, have a lovely evening Tania. Xx
Kitchin Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 4:08 PM
John, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 10:07 AM
It is very popular in Malta. Unfortunately, my small garden has little sun. The great variety of hues is a delight to see, especially when the plants have flowers of more than one colour. Hugs.
Kitchin Avatar
November 19, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Victor, thank you for your visit.
Cunningham Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:12 AM
Beautiful flowers they are too Tania, I love the smell of them. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:53 AM
Tom, thank you.
George Avatar
November 17, 2024 at 8:17 PM
Geraniums, I really love. They are a real beauty in their glossy petals and striking colors. Even their leaves are beautiful. Enjoyed your poem in lovely rhyme.
Kitchin Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Valsa, thank you.
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