The Geisha - Walk Softly Contest

I smile serenely and sit
waiting as my mentor taught
to please weary gentlemen
massaging egos.





Penned 11 August 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Morgan Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 9:38 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Hi Morgan, thank you ...Seren
A  Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Congrats Seren, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 11:27 PM
Thank you Skat ...Seren
Adams Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:57 PM
congrats on your win! Good write :)
Roberts Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 11:25 PM
Hi Sandra, thans for stopping by ...Seren
Richards Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:45 PM
Yes.......for what their softness is trained to do... Nicely done, Seren!!
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 7:18 PM
Thank you Carrie. .....Seren
Guzzi Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:19 PM
Hello Debbie many thanks ...Seren
Arowolo Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Congrats on your win,great pal.
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 3:27 PM
Hello O.A. Thanks for the congrats ...Seren
Onclaud Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 1:47 PM
lovely imagery, seren.. super congrats on your stunning win!..:) hugggs
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 3:28 PM
Hi Nette. Thanks for your kind comment ...Seren
Lamoureux Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 6:59 AM
I see we picked the same picture. I enjoyed reading yours. Congratulations.
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 3:29 PM
Great minds Richard.... Thanks for stopping by and your comment ....Seren
Mehta Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 5:41 AM
Congrats on the win
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Ram for your comment ...Seren...
A   Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 4:53 AM
a lovely poem and win..Seren... xox..pd
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Thanks PD ...Seren
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:05 PM
I remember yours and how Much I liked it the first time I saw it. It was one of the first ones I saw in this contest and helped inspire me to want to try one too. Congrats, Seren and thanks for your fun birthday wish.
Roberts Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 5:19 AM
Hi Andrea thanks for the congrats ....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 7:31 PM
Congratulations sass love xx
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 10:41 PM
Thank you Mandy...hugs...Seren
May Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 4:02 PM
congrats on your win Seren
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 5:24 PM
Thank you Joseph
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 2:58 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 5:23 PM
thank you Sarah
Vaso Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Very nice, my ego is a wee bit sore! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 7:18 AM
This is super good, Seren!!! One of the best I've seen in this contest. Just say egos. It doesn't need the apostrophe. I hope Debs loves it!
Sivey Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:46 PM
This is a spellbinding write crafted by your illustrious pen! I really enjoyed reading this perfect poem this evening! You will do wonderfully in the contest, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:51 PM
I wish Russell, so many better poets in the room....Seren
Cavanaugh Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:10 PM
Yes I agree with Nette the "massaging ego's" is a wonderful ending to the poem.
Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 10:21 AM
you wordplay brings me to another place and time, seren... you just amaze; i like the ego bit..:) huggs
Roberts Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:09 PM
thank you Nette , I have my moments of inspiration lol...Seren
May Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 7:45 AM
very good write Seren.....best wishes...thanks for stopping by..
Roberts Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 9:03 AM
Thank you Joseph....Seren
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