The Gateway To Your Lonely Tomb

"The corrosion on my soul lingers, like the gateway I enter to your lonely tomb. November 9, 2016
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Lindley Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 5:38 PM
My, my what a beautifully sad verse. Depth and intensity can be felt immediately upon its reading.. A7
La France Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully sad line ~
Allison Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 7:35 PM
many congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx
Selfa Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 12:20 PM
I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!
Milliner Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:27 AM
I feel the emotional connection throught this piece. Congratulations, Laura ;->!
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Hi Laura, You penned such a sad and dark monoku. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Deep and dark, Laura...and powerful. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra
Callus Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Such a lovely one-liner, Laura; I rate it amongst the best in this winners' list! Congratulations! Regards // paul
Murray Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Your sister's tomb I presume Laura? So haunting and so sad. Congratularions on your well deserved win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Representing gate of your mourning soul! Congrats, Luloo!
Wanter Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 5:51 PM
So much meaning in so few words. How did you do it?
Green Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 5:12 PM
That was deep definitely a little dark but so cool Laura. Might be the best one I have read on this theme.
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