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The Gateway To Your Lonely Tomb

"The corrosion on my soul lingers, like the gateway I enter to your lonely tomb. November 9, 2016

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Robert Lindley

Date: 11/29/2016 5:38:00 PM

My, my what a beautifully sad verse. Depth and intensity can be felt immediately upon its reading.. A7

Constance La France

Date: 11/12/2016 8:09:00 PM

Laura congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully sad line ~

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2016 7:35:00 PM

many congrats on your win LuLoo:-) hugs jan xx

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 11/12/2016 12:20:00 PM

I love to see good things come to good people. This is one of those times. Congratulations!

Sarita Milliner

Date: 11/12/2016 10:27:00 AM

I feel the emotional connection throught this piece. Congratulations, Laura ;->!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/11/2016 6:37:00 PM

Hi Laura, You penned such a sad and dark monoku. Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/11/2016 4:24:00 PM

Deep and dark, Laura...and powerful. Congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 8:51:00 AM

Such a lovely one-liner, Laura; I rate it amongst the best in this winners' list! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Jean Murray

Date: 11/11/2016 7:01:00 AM

Your sister's tomb I presume Laura? So haunting and so sad. Congratularions on your well deserved win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/10/2016 8:56:00 PM

Representing gate of your mourning soul! Congrats, Luloo!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/9/2016 5:51:00 PM

So much meaning in so few words. How did you do it?

Chris Green

Date: 11/9/2016 5:12:00 PM

That was deep definitely a little dark but so cool Laura. Might be the best one I have read on this theme.