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The Gate

I’ve had enough to last me a lifetime matey, so please open the bloody gate, it’s late and I’m awfully tired, and really blue, so do not stand in there,the warm,key so handy, open the bloody gate! Oh no rain!

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/9/2015 8:24:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your fine win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2015 10:45:00 PM

Hello Peter, I don't know this form. I like what you have here. Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/18/2015 8:16:00 AM

Yes, when one door closes, another one shuts. Great verse, and well done, Peter. Anywho, enough introspection, oh lyrical travel agent- we could all do with being transported to Wyoming, or Korea, chattering bedlam, spices, goats in the street, Joss sticks, beads.... we're in the coldest March for 53 years over here.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/16/2015 10:34:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this humorous work..I wonder if he ever got in?..Sara

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/16/2015 4:09:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this poem! I was slightly humored by it, yet at the same time, it has a sad, weary tone to it as well. Lovely one, and thanks for posting! Always, Laura

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 3:22:00 PM

wonderful poem Peter............SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 8:56:00 PM

I like your take on the contest - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/14/2015 11:46:00 AM

Rings my bell amigo. So many times I've felt that way in my long life. My problem was the Gate WAS NOT LOCKED. I was just too blind to see... Thank God my eyes were eventually opened. Great write A7 my friend..

John Lawless

Date: 3/14/2015 11:36:00 AM

"...could be worse.....could be raining" this is an interesting write leaving the interpretation open to so many variables. Nicely done.