The Gardener's Lament

A fickle young gardener called Burt,
Changed ladies much more than his shirt!
Until he beguiled
A vixen so wild
He's now planted deep in the dirt!

©deborah burch
6/07/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 11:18 AM
ya gots the meter rolling! She must have been related to that Bobbit woman? Light & Love
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June 9, 2012 at 12:16 PM
oi!!!!!!!!!!!! love it..pd
Burch Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:23 AM
thanks pd :)
Williams Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 2:53 AM
ha ha ha ha ha,,poor sod...well done cap'n DEb...love David
Burch Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 11:20 AM
thank you David :)
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June 8, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Ha Ha! This is a fantastic write my friend, quite the funny one! I really enjoyed the humor and loveliness of this poem! Great Work!!
Burch Avatar
June 8, 2012 at 9:09 PM
thank you sweet russell :)
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