Premiere Contest WinnerThe Gardener

A gardener took many seeds
            and planted them with tender care, 
            but when the beds were choked with weeds,
            the planter had no time to spare.

            Her life moved at a frantic pace.
            Demands of work and home were great.
            No flowers ever filled a vase,    
            for all had met a dismal fate.

             ***************************

            A gardener took many seeds
            and planted them while well aware
            that precious things have many needs
            for nurturance and tender care.

            Though life was a frenetic race,
            she found the time to cultivate.
            She joyously filled every vase,
            for blooms grew at a pleasing rate.



entered in Mystic Rose's Any Poem You Are Proud of Contest on May 20, 2017

December 24, 2018, entered in Mark Toney's 2019 Poetry Marathon--mile 3
placed 2nd

October, 2016, entered in Brian Strand's Contest 216--Placed 1st

March 1, 2019, entered in Maureen McGreavy's What I Really Like Contest

Date: March 31, 2019
Contest Title: 2019 Poetry Marathon Final Placement       Placed 10th
Sponsor: Mark Toney
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Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:10 PM
This poem has served you really well, I see, in other contests here. Way to go, Janice. I love the message in your poem. So wise! Congrats for your win and for your overall performance in Mark's marathon.
Canerdy Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:36 PM
Lovely parallel, Janice. Congrats on your beautiful poem and your high placement in this marathon contest.
Canerdy Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Janice
Rushing Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 10:13 PM
Congratulations on your win Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Thanks so much, Wren! Janice
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Janice, congratulations on your placement in the Poetry Marathon Contest! I was so happy to see you on the list and to read your final poem once more. Well done! Hugs, Sandra :)
Canerdy Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 6:10 AM
Thanks so much, Sandra. You are a great poet and a kind encourager! Janice
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 4:37 PM
Janice, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, you have won TENTH PLACE overall in my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest!!! Kudos to you for your well-deserved win! ~Mark
Canerdy Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 6:53 PM
THANKS a million, Mark, for my placement and for your dedication to these contests. Janice
Williams Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Janice, I love your comparison and contrast between the two gardeners, or maybe between the same gardener now a little wiser in the second half. In any event, this is a lovely write that I truly enjoyed. Congratulations on your high placement in the contest, and best wishes to you during the rest of the marathon! You have my very best wishes. :) Bartholomew
Canerdy Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thank you for this GREAT comment, Bartholomew! Either way, your take on the poem would be correct. Happy New Year! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 8:06 PM
That's a great commentary on TLC as well as a sharp contrast between the two gardeners. Beautifully penned, Janice. Congratulations on your win in the marathon contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Thanks so much, Carolyn! Janice
Haight Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 7:46 PM
Janice, congratulations on another top win for this beautifully written poem! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra! Janice
Gondolf Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:25 PM
Beautiful poetry, Janice, congrats on your podium win! John
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 6:14 PM
Thanks so much, John! Janice
Toney Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 3:06 PM
Janice, congrats on your win on mile 3 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. I love the contrast between the first two and last two stanzas. We need to make time for "precious things." Brilliant! ~Mark
Canerdy Avatar
December 26, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Mark, this win has made my day. THANK YOU so much! Janice
Scars Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Janice, just beautiful lovely lady...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Canerdy Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much, Luloo! Janice
Flower Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 5:20 AM
Nicely penned quatrain, Janice. Congrats! ;)
Canerdy Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much, Moon Flower! Janice
May Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:13 PM
BEautiful write Janice...Congrats on your win
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph! Janice
Milliner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 12:14 PM
A pleasant read, congratulations!
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Thanks so much, Sarita! Janice
Nusker Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Wonderful poem, Janis. Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Thank so much, Afzal! Janice
Grasso Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Beautifully done, Janice! Congratulations on your trophy win! ...Fran
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:31 PM
Thanks, Fran! I'm over the moon. Janice
Makama Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 6:40 AM
This is lovely. Wishing you a wonderful christmas season and a fulfilling new year.
Canerdy Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 8:57 AM
Thank you so much, Funom! God bless you. Merry Christmas Janice
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