The Garden Tomb

Stars burning across your garden,
Saturn's shadow chasing my soul
imprisoned within window-panes,
pressing firmly
your hand print
knuckles whitened,
brown eyes fixed through entombed vessels
once a mirrored heart.

Dancing in my darkened room,
your white cotton gown
tattered
thread-bare
transparent,
shrouding your body.

Your brazen smirk, 
inked indigo blue
washing my old shirt in hate, 
wrapped arms
are you wearing my skin 
a sanctuary of secrets--

bandaged hair tied with pinned bones 
loosely across a glass shattered back

sipping that damn mint tea,
a Jezebel's cure for insomnia.
cradled with delicate hands,
hands that clutch my spirit
hands stained crimson red
you murderer of memories.

Darkness finds me awake
paralyzed by endless weaving roads,
my presence--
an aroma of the rotting apricot stained lips
the faceless mural on a wall,
life burning away layers of ash
settling the soot on your
black
tear-stained
pillows.

Functioned divorced my body,
wanting you to release me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 1/5/2010 8:56:00 AM
Many congratulations on your fine poetry being featured this week, Happy New Year to you >> James
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Date: 1/4/2010 12:03:00 PM
The vivid imagery for a powerful poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your gifted and unique talent! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on your gifted and unique talent! Hugs Always, Robin
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Date: 1/4/2010 3:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jason. May you have may more. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2009 10:32:00 PM
Jason, best of luck in the next round...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:05:00 PM
Three poems making it through the first round in the contest. Way to go, Jason! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Jason. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2008 2:25:00 PM
I cannot believe this has not been reviewed yet! '...sanctuary of secrets,' '...tied back with pinned bones,' '...murderer of memories,' ...wonderful phrasing. You are the real deal my friend! Best wishes, Keith (PS please take a look at 'Nightscapes;' a tribute to Eliot.) Thanks!
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