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The Garden of The Wilted Rose

This pain is all too real;
I wonder if anyone really knows.
All the hurt, I was unable to conceal,
For I stood alone in the garden of the wilted rose.

Alone, lost in old memories,
As the briars clung to my clothes.
I feel the bite of the chilly breeze
Standing in the garden of the wilted rose.

I look for answers but they can’t be found,
And my thoughts scatter as the wind blows.
Wilted petals on the ground held me spellbound,
But I finally escaped the garden of the wilted rose!

Note:  I wrote this for Madison Thomer because she loved the line from my 
poem, “Heartache”.
‘You can find me in the garden of the wilted rose’
Hope you like it, Madison.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/19/2010 10:42:00 PM
my dear friend, this is an absolute treasure. i am greatly honored, i thank you for this beautiful piece. i believe you have made what was a crappy day much better. thank you my friend. this was profound, with even more lines to fall in love with. i am working on my part of our collaboration piece just to let you know :) and shall email you soon. take care my friend, and thank you again this is going into my faves. --Madison, with many thanks
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Date: 11/19/2010 12:29:00 PM
This is really good, JAM! Kind of sad Kyrielle but good, nevertheless! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:31:00 PM
A very moving and well-written Kyrielle, Jimmy. I'll leave a note for Madison asking her to read it. Your poem "Heartache" was beautiful! Love, Carolyn
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