Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

The Garden of Jesus

The Garden Of JESUS

Jesus has a garden, a beautiful site to see.
One that is breath taking, for anyone that
goes there will sure agree with me. In His 
garden He has only the best flowers that
anyone could ever see.

He came to Earth one day. A special flower 
He was looking for. He went to many places
looking for that special one, Than He saw my
mother and said - she is the one that I'm
waiting for.

He closed her eyes and told her, I am taking
you home, so my garden you can adorn. As we 
saw her leave with Him - we couldn't help but
cry, but we also felt some joy as we saw her
by His side.

Mother we will miss you, but we know where you 
are at. You are at a very special place - where they
only take the best. The Angels are very happy, they
are going to celebrate, they heard that you were coming
and a banquet they prepared, for you my dear mother,
because you are now one of the best.... 

07/15/2013
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Lynn Glover December 2, 2014 at 11:37 PM Lucilla, you produce a very masterful write in memory of your Mom. Just great. Thanks for posting this one. Your friend, Lynn.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 8, 2014 at 4:36 AM You made me tears eyed with this sweet Lucy... This a remarkable tribute filled with love acceptance and letting go... Hugs Lucy..:) Lucilla Carrillo June 8, 2014 at 5:58 AM Thank you Olive, I'm glad you liked it.

Toquyen Harrell April 20, 2014 at 7:08 PM Oh, I love this. May you find peace in His love and yes, she is one of the best :) Lucilla Carrillo April 20, 2014 at 8:51 PM Thank you Toquyen, my mom passed away one year ago in September.

Andrea Dietrich July 27, 2013 at 9:26 AM what a beautiful way to depict your mother going to heaven. JUst beautiful, Lucilla.

Eileen Manassian July 23, 2013 at 6:50 AM Very beautiful, Lucilla...Yes...one day we will all walk through that garden, reunited with the ones we love forever and always....HUGS

Richard Lamoureux July 20, 2013 at 5:33 PM Beautiful! I feel refreshed. I hope you will consider entering a poem in my Girl Rising Contest. I would love to have your voice added to this important topic.

Nette Onclaud July 18, 2013 at 3:33 PM gracious lines express the loving touch you so have, lucilla... uplifting and soulful!.:) huggs

Donna Jones July 16, 2013 at 11:58 AM Such a lovely beautiful tribute ...obviously for a wonderful mother...God bless Lucilla

Jack Ellison July 16, 2013 at 5:56 AM This is an amazing piece, my dear Lucilla! Kudos! Hugs, Jack xoxox

Sara Kendrick July 16, 2013 at 5:31 AM Great work honoring your mother..It is good that you and she had a special relationship...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Russell Sivey July 15, 2013 at 5:48 PM This is such a beautiful and a wondrously well written write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What an astonishing piece, Great Work!!

Bl Devnath July 15, 2013 at 11:55 AM Beautiful fact is penned in to poem lovely. Enjoyed the read much. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2013 at 11:28 AM - Lucilla, thanks for the beautiful poem! - Always enjoyable to read your beautiful poem. - Always love in your thoughts. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)