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The Garden Gate

The garden grown is spread full blown From the seeds of hope I have sown Behind the high walls of life, it waits I struggle so to find its gate Upon my path the light has flown Now darkness hides my passions fate

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Gary Radice

Date: 10/5/2024 12:21:00 PM

Another great poem Lonna. Your poem has a lyrical quality to it. Cheers - Gary

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/16/2024 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Gary..all my best wishes to you.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/16/2024 9:09:00 AM

Dear Lonna, I loved how you showed that garden as the potential of transcendence and yes sometimes it just seems so unachievable. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lonna Blodgett
Date: 10/4/2024 7:23:00 PM

Thank you for sending this very much appreciated comment Daniel!