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The Garden

Morning sunlight washes across me,
like a ripple crossing a pond,
awakens my senses to a garden,
where my life is.
I sit among flowers
and inhale fragrant scents.
Free my burdens, listen to the wind,
allow my heart to feel young again,
to dream of times forgotten,
when I ran through life's meadows,
conquering the world, seeking treasure.
  I hold these memories close,
so I may find them in days of gray,
when tears will fall on sacred ground,
that was my life.

In this solitude,
I'll come to reflect on times of sadness,
that came and went without fault.
I'll touch moments when I found paradise,
when I caressed the face of love
and flew with eagle's wings,
to places where imagination and reality fought,
leaving my beaten body,
to wash up on the empty shores of loneliness,
as I sought refuge from my own illusions.

It's there where I found this garden,
where my soul rests,
dancing across time touching rainbows and wishes,
listening to birds sing among the humming of bee's wings,
finding comfort with the treasures I found,
placing them in the lonely spaces of my heart,
where they give me pause to smile.

2/12/17  words 199
contest Any Free Verse Poem in 200 Words or Less
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 3/10/2017 5:32:00 PM
This is such a peaceful write Frederick, love your phraseology, just a beautiful write!
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:20:00 PM
Fredric, I love the reflective sentiments and honest beauty of this! You have touched on so many human emotions (especially for those of us getting older). I enjoyed your words tonight. Congrats on your win...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2017 10:33:00 AM
...in the garden enjoying the fruits of your labors and sharing them with us.....nicely done Frederic and congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:32:00 AM
I am definitely not surprised to see your name under this beautiful poem Frederic! You have such a soothing way with words, and I will tell you that until time is no more---thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 2/13/2017 1:57:00 PM
- It sounds like a lovely garden, with rest for mind and soul - Beautifully written, Frederic - Luck in the contest ... a 7 from me are coming your way :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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