The Garden

My autumn wine; white winter rose
Please tell me how your garden grows?
I’ve lost my touch, I feared as much
You are fragile and it shows

Can I still call upon you?
With no words ever spoken to you?
And would you come to me?
Could you hear me in a dream?

Would you “sense” me if I came close,
But not in sight of you eyes?
Would you tempt me if giving up hope
Could cleanse me of all the lies?

I survive through a disguise
Designed to hide my immortal light
You will never see it
For I am a chameleon
Crawling through the ancient garden
The (other) not known as Eden
For it has no name to keep it safe
Until light shines on this darkened place

“April showers bring May flowers”
And so your flower has not yet soured
You still have the power to reverse your desires
My white winter rose, will you grow any higher?

Prosper or wither
The choice is now yours
Bound or severed
I’ve done all I could
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 8, 2010 at 9:44 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem making it through the first round, keep your powerful pen writing… excellent you! Your friend in poetry Adeleke
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January 5, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations, Jackie. You have made it through the first round of judging for Poetrysoup October 13, 2009 poetry contest. The Garden holds so many inspirations and insights. I guess it is God's gift to man... Gardens of life! Very nice poem. 2009 was a successful year of poetry for you. I come, now, wishing you continued success in your writing endeavors throughout 2010 and for many years to come. God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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December 22, 2009 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Jackie. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:55 PM
Dear Jackie, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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December 21, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:42 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Jackie! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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November 18, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Congrats on your fabulous poem being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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November 16, 2009 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Iolanda
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November 16, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured this week >> James
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November 16, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
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November 16, 2009 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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November 15, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Another featured write for this poem. Congratulations. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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August 22, 2009 at 8:25 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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August 18, 2009 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on being featured>>James
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August 18, 2009 at 9:51 AM
Jackie, Congratulations on having your beautiful poem featured this week. Lovingly, DAS-J
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August 18, 2009 at 7:14 AM
nice weaving of imagery and words. Congrats on your feature. Krista
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August 17, 2009 at 6:15 PM
Nice use of imagery with an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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August 17, 2009 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jackie. Love Carol
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