The Gambler

The steely-eyed hombre stepped down from the stage that sultry afternoon.
He looked about with disdain, then swaggered to the Cripple Creek Saloon.
His hat lay low upon his brow and swung low was a pair of 44's on his hips.
He sported fancy duds and greeted a few loafers with a snarl on his lips.

Jeremiah Slade was the feller's name and gamblin' was his trade.
He sauntered up to the bar and stunned the bartend by orderin' a lemonade!
Then he strolled to a table in the back of the room with his back to the wall.
(This was his usual modus operandi just in case there was a free-fer-all!)

He announced, "Boy's, my name's Jeremiah Slade and gamblin' is my game;
Join me and ante up fer a round of poker, but, boys let's keep it tame!"
Three chumps took the bait and scurried fer Jeremiah's table to grab a chair!
He let the dudes win a game or so to assure that things were fair and square.

Now, unknown to the three suckers, Slade was a professional gyp!
The scoundrel was invited to leave umpteen towns west of the Mississip!
Slade had a few tricks up a sleeve that he soon entered into play.
Mysteriously, numerous aces appeared in his draws and were on display!

The trio got wise to his game and jammed three rods in Jeremiah's face!
He was quickly consigned to eternity fer playin' too many an ace!
Jeremiah was conveyed out of town, that no-good cunnin' knave,
And now lies at the foot of Mount Pisgah a-molderin' in his grave!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 5/18/2021 7:45:00 AM
Woah oh my what a fantastic tale like from a novel, related in a dramatic way, what a horrible ending to this gambler, it is all fiction right? You narrated it so awesomely in fabulous clever rhyming I enjoyed it lots. Kudos!! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 5/16/2021 4:55:00 PM
G'day Bob ... I've said it a number of times that I enjoy your western poems and this one is no exception. Gambling is a risky business but the rewards can be high if you have an escape route planned - thanks again Bob - Lindsay
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 5/17/2021 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Lindsay. Wish I could come up with more of them. Best on you, Mate! - Bob H
Date: 5/13/2021 1:15:00 PM
I loved reading your saga of Jeremiah Slade, Robert. Many a no-good cunnin' knaves came to an early grave like this. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 5/13/2021 12:13:00 PM
This was great, Bob! I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/13/2021 10:45:00 AM
You are a master at these. Adios Jeremiah.! So well written...,KUDOS Creativity to the max. Pamgie
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Date: 5/13/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! I love to write western stuff and wish I could come up with more - Bob
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