The Full Moon (The Rest of It)

Tonight is the full moon, through  the clouds it’s blazing bright,
And from the tingle I feel in my bones, it’ll be quite a night;

It’s the one night a month that the moon has control,
I can feel it in my being, all the way to my soul;

The sway the moon holds over me, is calling out in victory,
I can feel it now I’m letting go, soon the monster will be free;

Just one night a month the beast can roam,
And it’s the one night a month that I never come home;

The brute takes over my body and will,
And destroys everything with deadly skill;

All I can do is sit back for the ride,
All conscious thoughts are trapped inside;

So many times I’ve tried to get out,
But I can’t even do so much as a shout;

When the demon inside me once again is at large,
Beware to you all, because I’m not in charge!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/2/2010 9:23:00 AM
Everyone has their demons:) ...Really loved this one, especially the detailed description of the 'metamorphosis'. Intriguing story, Tirzah! ~Emily
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:04:00 PM
Release the evil haha not evil but I like the way it sounds lol,, cool write, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 7/1/2010 6:41:00 PM
Ha ha, that were-wolf breaks free. I loved your original couplet, leaving the interpretation upto the reader, but I love this extended version too. Great read ~ Sharon :)
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