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Written: August 18, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In the half-light of another realm, A day without you—my heart overwhelmed. I claim the stillness as my own sun. Seeking solace until our souls are one Time slides across the surface of a frozen river. Echoing memories that bear my heart shiver. I wander through the depths of my mind, Searching for—the love I left behind. Skirting the stars—I yearn to find the way. To bestow back the light and bear your stay. But I do not cognize when I became the night. When darkness consumed me, I took flight. I have lost my memory—my thoughts a haze, But the feeling of your love is still ablaze. My dear, all I remember is you. And the way you made my heart pursue. In the depths of my soul, your love lingers. A flame that burns, my eternal muse, my singer I do not remember when it all began. When your love courts—my heart spans. But I agnize that in the half-light embrace, I found my purpose, and I found my grace. With every persuasion of you, my dear, I became a poet—free from fear. Words flowed through me as a gentle breeze. Painting pictures of our love with ease. In the half-light of another realm, I found solace—I found the helm.

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Date: 8/20/2023 6:48:00 PM
Perfection
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Date: 8/18/2023 8:21:00 PM
"In the depths of my soul, your love lingers. A flame that burns, my eternal muse, my singer" This binding relationship of you with your muse is evident in your poems that 'words flow through you as a gentle breeze, painting beautiful pictures' Cannot be disputed. Beautiful !
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Date: 8/18/2023 2:39:00 PM
Sotto, incredibly beautiful, you are a master poet, this is a masterpiece of exquisite beauty. A fave, of course, how could it not be. Simply lovely!
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Date: 8/18/2023 2:32:00 PM
Hello Sotto,a wonderful poem! Have a blessed day!!
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Date: 8/18/2023 9:46:00 AM
This is beautiful and I love the ending too :)
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Date: 8/18/2023 9:20:00 AM
This write is wonderfully romantic, Lasaad. Word choice and rhymes are spot on. Soup mail for you.
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