The Frog

on a leaf, sailing smoothly to bygone phrases laced with time I bow to unknown spirits, watching trees dance in orphic autumn

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Date: 1/24/2009 10:26:00 AM

Ernesto, I like your poem, beautiful and interesting. all my best Fide

Date: 10/18/2008 10:23:00 AM

Breathtaking, Ernesto! The imagery in this Tanka is so visually gorgeous! Congrats on your win in Kristin's contest. Peace always, John

Date: 10/13/2008 9:30:00 AM

Great imagery, Ernesto !! Congratulations on your win in Kristin's contest and congratulations to Otsenre as well ... smile

Date: 10/12/2008 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations Ernesto on your win in Kristin's contest! Well done! Love, Shar

Date: 9/22/2008 5:43:00 PM

Great imagery and free feeling to this write! good luck in the contest! Laura :)

Date: 9/20/2008 4:24:00 AM

This poem is very well written and very peaceful spiritually - Great Job & God Bless