The French Sans Rafa

The red clay’s staining all the socks,
But Rafa’s aren’t there 
And yet, his fourteen titles
Still remain beyond compare.

Most years he gets to celebrate
His birthday at the French.
Today, though, he’s not on the court
Or even on the bench.

Perhaps his little surgery
Will fix him up like new
So all his fans (like me!) can watch
Him do what he can do.

To Rafael Nadal, I wish
A happy birthday day
And a quick recovery so you
Can get back out and play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 7:44 PM
I hear you, ilene... though Rafa's feet probably look like ground meat at this point. The guy's played through pain that would have most of us in the hospital... We'll see what happens, but I wouldn't hold my breath here. ~ gw
Amadore Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 6:28 PM
Beautifully written, Ilene, and definitely original, especially in the beginning several lines which pique the interest of the reader and lead to your rapid revelation of subject and place. Clever and satisfying.
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Ahh!! How thoughtful this one. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 11:53 AM
aww i know how much you love your tennis Ilene, what a sweet tribute to Nadal. I have been listening to the TT races on the radio. have a super weekend:-) hugs Jan xx
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