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The Freeing

Shining trail of buried light come forth and shed your skin. For at third glance one cannot view the jealous shadow’s muse. Force, not dread, will be your aid in summoning a change of hue. Shining trail of guiding light, I’m pleased to have now met you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/5/2010 8:04:00 PM
What an uplifting poem. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Stacy. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 7:14:00 AM
i love this poem. to me its a tale of forcing yourself to overcome your obstaclers and your set backs and striving to come back from them. Which may not be what you meant, but i enjoyed what i took from it. Best of luck- Paul
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Date: 5/21/2010 9:06:00 AM
Stacy, interesting read - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, mj
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Date: 5/19/2010 8:09:00 AM
What an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:32:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Stacy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/9/2009 6:22:00 AM
great work, wonderful lines , "Jealous shadows muse" strong line ,,,Johnathon
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:12:00 PM
Lovely poem Stacy, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:11:00 PM
Lovely poem Stacy, a warm welcome to the Soup >> James
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Date: 10/22/2009 2:48:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Stacy. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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