The Free Verse At That Night

The two charged patches of clouds clashed in the hills
The flash bared the curved falls
The trees to blossom got taller
A mad rush for the raindrops
The night too short to accommodate the long tale



15 June, 2018
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Date: 6/21/2018 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this short but compelling poem. Well done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/21/2018 11:57:00 PM
Thank you so much , Susan ...
Date: 6/19/2018 3:36:00 PM
I really enjoyed this read!! Congrats for your win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/20/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea for your kind visit and the comment ...
Date: 6/18/2018 8:08:00 AM
It sounds like a really frightening thunderstorm, many congratulations on your well deserved win,
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2018 12:40:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/17/2018 12:23:00 PM
- I visit your poem Probir, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/18/2018 7:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sunshine ...
Date: 6/17/2018 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Probir :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2018 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 6/17/2018 7:18:00 AM
Great lines Probir... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent for the placement ...
Date: 6/16/2018 11:58:00 AM
i like the mood of this piece... foreboding, probir... well done!..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/17/2018 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Nette ...
Date: 6/15/2018 7:07:00 PM
Sounds like a storm and a rush of writing flow either or all at once! Well written Probir! :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/16/2018 6:25:00 AM
That sounds nice, Heidi ! ... Thank you ...
Date: 6/15/2018 5:04:00 PM
This is a wonderful write, Probir. Sounds like a heavy thunderstorm which can be very frightening at times. Good luck my friend:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/16/2018 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel for your comments ...
Date: 6/15/2018 3:15:00 PM
- Yes, the night is too short ... - A lovely poem, Probir - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/16/2018 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
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