Probir Gupta Poet Free verse

The Free Verse At That Night

The two charged patches of clouds clashed in the hills
The flash bared the curved falls
The trees to blossom got taller
A mad rush for the raindrops
The night too short to accommodate the long tale



15 June, 2018
For When line five enables your poem to thrive Poetry Contest : Sponsored by: Silent One

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Susan Gentry June 21, 2018 at 5:38 PM Congratulations on your win with this short but compelling poem. Well done! Probir Gupta June 21, 2018 at 11:57 PM Thank you so much , Susan ...

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 3:36 PM I really enjoyed this read!! Congrats for your win. Probir Gupta June 20, 2018 at 11:30 PM Thank you so much, Andrea for your kind visit and the comment ...

Faraz Ajmal June 18, 2018 at 8:08 AM It sounds like a really frightening thunderstorm, many congratulations on your well deserved win, Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 12:40 PM Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2018 at 12:23 PM - I visit your poem Probir, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta June 18, 2018 at 7:34 AM Thank you so much, Sunshine ...

Heidi Sands June 17, 2018 at 11:30 AM Congratulations for your win Probir :) Probir Gupta June 17, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thank you, Heidi ...

Silent One June 17, 2018 at 7:18 AM Great lines Probir... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Probir Gupta June 17, 2018 at 9:40 AM Thank you so much, Silent for the placement ...

Nette Onclaud June 16, 2018 at 11:58 AM i like the mood of this piece... foreboding, probir... well done!..huggs Probir Gupta June 17, 2018 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Nette ...

Heidi Sands June 15, 2018 at 7:07 PM Sounds like a storm and a rush of writing flow either or all at once! Well written Probir! :) Probir Gupta June 16, 2018 at 6:25 AM That sounds nice, Heidi ! ... Thank you ...

Daniel Turner June 15, 2018 at 5:04 PM This is a wonderful write, Probir. Sounds like a heavy thunderstorm which can be very frightening at times. Good luck my friend:) Probir Gupta June 16, 2018 at 6:26 AM Thank you, Daniel for your comments ...

Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2018 at 3:15 PM - Yes, the night is too short ... - A lovely poem, Probir - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Probir Gupta June 16, 2018 at 6:27 AM Thank you, Sunshine ...