The Freckled Face of a Girl

~~~
Dappled grey horses
sweat crusted and weary
hooves drifting dust
lift a day
passing dreary
The harness bells faded
reigned in at the rill
a cool running brook
near the base of our hill
~
My eyes
I'm a lad
scant older than four
brought visions to mind
full of wonders in store
A wagon decked out
like a big city market
he lifted the side
then he shook out the carpet
~
Our old kitchen door
screamed out
lack of oil
a kettle
clanged gently
just set on to boil
E'er mother's voice shouted
"I think it's the Pox
the old folks have died
I've been digging their plots"
~
"My father's in bed
and they won't let me near"
the stranger walked by
with a smile
mussed my hair
Went in with a bag
full of magic he grows
started mixing a broth
made with god only knows
~
Tip toed on a box
dragged in from the yard
through windows
he folded
gunpowder with lard
The screams of my father
sent tears to my eyes
they rubbed him completely
in spite of his cries
~
They fed him the broth
a few drops at a time
I climbed off the box
with his horses in mind
"The horses love apples"
I turned with a whirl
peeking out from his wagon
the freckled face
of a girl
~
In moments I knew her
a lifetime
it seemed
a most likeable friend
who knew all the schemes
As father got better
t'was time to move on
her father
a doctor
a peddler
a con
~
He'd done us a service
we could never repay
though he sold us an organ
an' stool
by the way
Each year they returned
once or twice
they dropped by
little freckle faced Mary
soon
the girl of my eye
~
They'd rest a few days
with each visit
it's true
she wrote the best love songs
while I wrote the tunes
Then one night it happened
'neath moon and the stars
consummating a love
that would forever
be ours
~
He stumbled upon us
but said not a word
in the morning
so early
fading echoes we heard
Ne'er again did we see them
though rumors
of peril ...
my parents expired
to a place 'neath the barrow
~
Five years had surpassed
isolation and grief
knocked a lamp
from the table
when I'd fallen asleep
The house nearly cinder
an' I felt like the fool
only item I'd saved
was the old organ stool
~
Just sat there and watched
till the sun broke the morn
in the distance
an echo
I'd heard years before
Then over the rise
sweat crusted and weary
two dappled grey horses
on a day
passing dreary
~
The horses reigned in
right next to the rill
that sweet running brook
at the base of our hill
A woman climbed down
took a step
to the glade
the dawning day's sun
streaming in to pervade
~
A light in my heart
jumped a thousand times fold
the smile in her eyes
and the story's been told
The tears
fell in rapture
though nothing was said
embraced
now with Mary
she'd returned from the dead
~
She unhitched the horses
I lifted the side
"The years have been kind"
I said
lifting her pride
"Are you my daddy?"
I turned with a whirl
peeking out from the wagon
the freckled face
of a girl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/17/2014 9:44:00 AM
Rex, one of the best poems I've read today. SKAT
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Date: 1/22/2014 7:26:00 PM
WOW! That was just such a striking and most beautiful story of love!! It kept me embraced and hope of who once was lost and now has found :) I felt every bit of it :) Absolutely Loved It!!!
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thank you Trish... Happy to have brought a smile :)
Date: 1/21/2014 3:45:00 PM
Abeautiful story told in your own style Rex....loved it very vivid imagery
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Date: 1/27/2014 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Peter... Glad you liked it :)
Date: 1/7/2014 11:13:00 AM
Hello Rex, , thank you for everything, Congrats for the well deserved win...always~ Linda
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Rex Mccoy
Date: 1/7/2014 3:13:00 PM
Thank you Linda... I finally figured out how to reply. Forgive me for being so new to the board. I wasn't sure whether this poem was entered or not, because I can't seem to find where the contest entries are hidden :) this poem is actually a true story, about my great great grand parents... I still have the organ stool
Date: 1/2/2014 8:14:00 PM
Hi Rex, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Rex Mccoy
Date: 1/7/2014 3:25:00 PM
Hi Skat... Thank you for reading and I'm sure to see your work in my wanderings about the board. I enjoy the writings of others, but seldom write anything myself anymore. Have written a fair few in the past though. :)
Date: 1/2/2014 11:21:00 AM
Hello REX, a cool story, vivid... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/2/2014 11:12:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Rex !! A very well written poem - :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/7/2014 3:20:00 PM
Pleased to meet you Anne-Lise... I may not post too much but I like to read and reply to others who've taken the time to write. :)
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