Sandra Haight Poet Fibonacci

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My Mom - 1916-1971

The Frame

I
see
within
this antique
ornate silver frame
a special woman whom I miss;
youthful face and sweet tender smile, looking straight at me.
Oh, dearest mom, you stay alive for me forever protected in this lovely frame.


Sandra M. Haight

~6th Place~
Contest: Form F
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Judged: 02/02/2017

Form: Fibonacci 
1 syllable, 1 syllable, 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 
8 syllables, 13 syllables, 21 syllables
Total: 54 Syllables

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Funom Makama March 6, 2017 at 10:37 AM This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Paulette Calasibetta February 10, 2017 at 12:58 PM Sandra, this is so touching...congratulations!

Agnes Krampe February 3, 2017 at 6:50 PM Beautiful tribute to your mom - congrats, Sandra!

Janis Medders Tobechi February 3, 2017 at 11:58 AM Wonderful tribute. Congratulations on your win. I can tell you are a master at fibonacci.

Kim Rodrigues February 2, 2017 at 10:16 PM Nice tribute, Sandra! Congrats!

Constance La France February 2, 2017 at 9:06 PM Sandra a beautiful poem, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2017 at 8:49 PM what a wonderful way to do that Frame theme, Sandra. GREAT poem in this form. Sandra Haight January 29, 2017 at 8:03 PM Thank you very much, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra

Daniel Turner January 26, 2017 at 8:45 AM Wow Mrs Sandra, she died so young. Wonderful tribute to your mother:) Sandra Haight January 29, 2017 at 8:03 PM Yes, Daniel...way too young. Thanks for reading my poem and for your supportive comment. Sandra

John Lawless January 25, 2017 at 9:26 PM Beautifully done Sandra Sandra Haight January 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM Thank you very much, John. Sandra

Charlie Smith January 25, 2017 at 9:17 PM Very well done Sandra, I never seem to be able to conform to those syllable restrictions...you did a masterful job. Sandra Haight January 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM Thank you so much, Charlie. Sandra

Agnes Krampe January 25, 2017 at 8:29 PM Great Fibonacci - the first I ever read, I believe. Good luck in the contest, Sandra. Sandra Haight January 26, 2017 at 7:20 AM Thank you very much, Agnes. Hugs, Sandra

John Beam January 25, 2017 at 8:24 PM Very Nice tribute in a lovely poem. Sandra Haight January 26, 2017 at 7:19 AM Thank you so much, John. Sandra