The Fox, the Wolf, the Coyote

CANIDS

The Fox

with cat-like slit eyes
lurking near the hen house. . . .
meow-less creature

Chihuahua-like ears
catch a sound in the bushes. . . .
hens can rest easy

a small rat scurries
with that vixen in pursuit . . . 
it’s fast-food tonight

Coyotes

song of the desert -
long howls declare “I am here”. . . . 
mice and rabbits hide

barking dogs in threes 
unlucky mice collected. . . .
live practice for cubs

yippy yippy yip
heard among those happy cubs. . . 
celebration time

The  Pack

the pack starts its hunt
mountains rise up before them. . . 
thirty miles to go

in dark night - dog fight
one alone - tail stands erect. . . . 
yellow eyes back off

wolf faces grinning
twenty pounds of meat for each. . . . 
like one hundred burgers


For PD's Inner Animal Contest: 
for fox, coyote, wolf haiku
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:26 PM
lol, yippy why would you? lol, love the imagery though
Davis Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Andrea This is some creative and interesting writing. You captured each animal in a fun and descriptive way. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my My Willpower poem
A   Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:50 PM
Andrea~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
A  Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:42 PM
congrats on your awesome contest entry luv*Skat
Beck Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:14 PM
excellent work from an excellent writer....wow you beat me by fifteen centimetres this time Andrea ! L O L best wishes as always...Syd
Maverick Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Great to see you in the winners ring Andrea, enjoyed the write today!
Horne Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:54 AM
LOL, Many congrats on your win, Andrea : )
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Phookan Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Enjoyed reading these very interestingly done haikus on these wild ones..Congrats Andrea on your fabulous win,,happy to be sharing my place with you. huggs , gautami
Osita Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 2:14 AM
Congrats on your big win in P.D's contest.I like the way you write.*cheers*
Sweetheart Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:23 PM
Congrats Andrea on your super special win in P.D.'s cool contest with this fantastic write about her mystique luv.. enjoy..
Onclaud Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:09 PM
shimmering 'kus, heartie! super cheers for the fine spot! :) huggs
Fassbender Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Andrea, awesome Haikus! Congrats for a great job in this contest. Love, Shani
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 5:51 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. Andrea
Knop Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Hi Andrea, just saw that I missed out this write of yours!You've painted a great picture of these creatures! Enjoyed the read!...Love, Gert
Faber Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 2:58 PM
really cool writing. i could imagine the pack in my mind, thanks for that and thanks for looking at my work nick
La France Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 9:04 AM
This was a difficult challenge for sure, and you did it "perfectly" best of luck in the contest~~
A   Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 7:10 PM
Ha! Ha! I get 2 correct you now.. he he! you got the title wrong.. As soon as i read your first haiku i stoped.. Only because I want to read all my entries on the day my contest is over.. Enjoyed stopping by,,P.D.
Kendrick Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great work..Not sure if the dog was the hamburger or were they robbing a garbage can? Sara
Ruebel Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 4:41 PM
Oh my! This is breathtaking Andrea! Number one to me....WOW As Always, Shar
Kapoor Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 8:21 AM
Very vivid and lovely sketch and description of these often forgotten animals in your beautiful Haiku series. Beautiful writes my friend and thanks for your kind and precious comments on my Story Poem ‘Rain, The Story’. Love and best wishes...Ravindra......Andrea Dietrich.
Pettit Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 7:58 AM
I agree with everything Kashinath says about this entry. You have impressed me again.
Poet Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Wonderful Haiku,Andrea.Must be a winner in the contest-Luv-kashinath
Anish Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Ah - our fellow creatures. We should remember we share this world with other species. Your poem makes a strong case for that. Love Matthew Anish
Austin Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Inner animal? I love the fox - had a good chuckle. You be sooooooo clever. I is done run outa gas poetically. I think it is only temporary. (I hope) Love, dave
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