Kurt Ravidas Poet Rhyme

The Four Bits Dizzy

Sometimes I cannot figure out whether
the Earth revolves too fast around the Sun
or probably it's just another one
insomnia that goes round the Nether
of the unconscious... A little dizzy
and nauseous but it shall come to pass
when I'll become again the center mass 
around with, as foamy and fizzy
as a champagne, the heady ether orbits
together with albeit not written yet,
as thick as "War and Peace", my novel that
will come into existence by the four bits
concept... 
               But on the other side it might
be possible I drank too much last night.

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Connie Marcum Wong August 16, 2019 at 8:31 PM I had to laugh at your unexpected ending Kurt. I came here after reading your latest poem about Dizzy. How you manage to pull us in when we are not even sure of the meaning of your words amazes me. You have a talent that is for certain, and I become captivated every time I read one of your poems. No exception here. I enjoyed both! : ) xxoo

Caren Krutsinger April 17, 2019 at 1:13 AM I usually get irritated when the ending is "waking up from a dream" or whatever kind of silliness people use who want to irritate me personally by abruptly ending a poem. This time, even though you pulled the same kind of trick at the end, it worked and I smiled. Kurt Ravidas April 17, 2019 at 8:46 AM Yeah, it's an old trick) I like you smiled, Caren.