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The Four Bits Dizzy

Sometimes I cannot figure out whether the Earth revolves too fast around the Sun or probably it's just another one insomnia that goes round the Nether of the unconscious... A little dizzy and nauseous but it shall come to pass when I'll become again the center mass around with, as foamy and fizzy as a champagne, the heady ether orbits together with albeit not written yet, as thick as "War and Peace", my novel that will come into existence by the four bits concept... But on the other side it might be possible I drank too much last night.

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Date: 8/16/2019 8:31:00 PM
I had to laugh at your unexpected ending Kurt. I came here after reading your latest poem about Dizzy. How you manage to pull us in when we are not even sure of the meaning of your words amazes me. You have a talent that is for certain, and I become captivated every time I read one of your poems. No exception here. I enjoyed both! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/17/2019 1:13:00 AM
I usually get irritated when the ending is "waking up from a dream" or whatever kind of silliness people use who want to irritate me personally by abruptly ending a poem. This time, even though you pulled the same kind of trick at the end, it worked and I smiled.
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 4/17/2019 8:46:00 AM
Yeah, it's an old trick) I like you smiled, Caren.

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