The Formula

THE FORMULA


The formula for peace in our heart
One is and that goes without fail:  
Let us love breath in and let all hate
Exhale! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
   21 SEPTEMBER 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 2:02 PM
- Yes, you're right, Demetrios !- many more people should think the same thought ! - Thank you !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise, for taking the time!
Carrillo Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 7:59 PM
I am going to do that right now. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Trifiatis Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 5:30 PM
You are a good person, Lucilla, you always do it! Thank you!
Ellison Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:41 AM
My friend, I'm exhaling... beautiful write! Have a great day! Cheers!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Don't forget to breath in too! Ha-ha! Thank you my friend, Jack, for your visit and love for humanity! You are one of a kind!
Anish Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 4:49 PM
Short and right to the point! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Thank you so much, Matthew, for your visit and your gracious comment!
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Much truth you have spoken in these lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 4:37 PM
Thank you dear, Sara! You are too kind!
Manassian Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:44 AM
What an amazing truth...what a beautiful exquisite plea. Demetrios...You amaze me! :) Lovely and sweet! Filakia
Manassian Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 8:45 AM
A 7...I read it earlier today, but posted my comment now....It is even more enthralling the second time round! :)
Sivey Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 5:49 AM
This write is so very true my friend! I wish we all could just love and let our hate dissipate, that is a dream of mine, but will only come to fruition whenever I die and enter the kingdom of heaven will that be truly true! But we can all try, do the best we can, the world would be a much better place to live in! I believe we could get rid of hate, but maybe have dislike sometimes, but no more hate would be a great miracle! This is a tremendous poem my friend! What a lovely piece! Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Russell, my friend, you are so right! Peace is a dream of yours and of mine and fortunately many more people, probably not as many as we wished to but we must keep this dream alive in the degree we can. Who knows, one day, a blessed day in the far future humanity might see peace to reign! Thank you so much!
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 4:29 AM
Beautiful epigram, If followed the world would be quite different, Demetrios
Trifiatis Avatar
September 21, 2013 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram! Yes, it would be a better world, indeed!
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