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"The Formidable Gambit"
Silence calculated and distinct conspiring with rules plays within the confined squares of a strict and ruthless mind preying on all moves untraceable unpredictable irretrievable in the opening move the long-legged fly is caught in the web silvery and slippery life remains in the veins still, never myopic thoughts like darts a sacrifice is quickly made for the sake of a child compensatory advantage smoothly spun black diamonds from silk sung in, rough-edged sharp as knives unbreakable murdering all her little darlings smoothly, swiftly that rook, no longer flies it’s venomous feet it is wordless now stuck in honey powerless, barricaded in a child crying in the distance thinks she is a ghost, unheard a mother preys waiting for the strongest peace to burn stronger than a bishop, knight, irrelevant discarded minor pieces The Endgame Study pure, unmarked dark unseen smoothly the silk is spun to save the child within Inside her, never a fly, there resides the executioner commanding on a diamond thrown the sting of a Bee they say - "she is something else" hornet witch queen Waits in time, all in good time, precise, bloodless and very clean there she will make her move Ancient in wisdom the mother of all mothers with a killer's instinct True Shantranj Queen (LadyLabyrinth/2020)
“That the topless towers be burnt And men recall that face, Move most gently if move you must In this lonely place. She thinks, part woman, three parts a child, That nobody looks; her feet Practice a tinker shuffle Picked up on the street. Like a long-legged fly upon the stream Her mind moves upon silence." (extract, “The Long-Legged Fly”, William Butler Yeats)
“Holy water cannot help you down Hours and armies couldn't keep me out I don't want your money I don't want your crowd See I have to burn Your kingdom down Holy water cannot help you now See I've had to burn your kingdom down And no rivers and no lakes can put the fire out I'm gonna raise the stakes, I'm gonna smoke you out”
1. "Kill Your Darlings" Kill your darlings” is a common piece of advice given by experienced writers. You kill your darlings when you decide to get rid of an unnecessary storyline, character, or sentences in any piece of creative writing—elements you may have worked hard to create but that must be removed for the sake of your overall story. 2. "The Endgame Study" In the game of chess, an endgame study, or just study, is a composed position—that is, one that has been made up rather than played in an actual game—presented as a sort of puzzle, in which the aim of the solver is to find the essentially unique way for one side to win or draw, as stipulated, against any moves the other side plays. There is no limit to the number of moves which are allowed to achieve the win; this distinguishes studies from the genre of direct mate problems (e.g. "mate in 2"). Such problems also differ qualitatively from the very common genre of tactical puzzles based around the middlegame, often based on an actual game, where a decisive tactic must be found. "Gambit" an act or remark that is calculated to gain an advantage, especially at the outset of a situation;2. (in chess) an opening move in which a player makes a sacrifice, typically of a pawn, for the sake of a compensating advantage. "compensatory advantage". "Compensatory advantage is a general mechanism of stratification, due to which individuals from advantaged social backgrounds are buffered against the negative consequences of a prior adverse outcome."

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Date: 10/30/2022 1:46:00 PM
“Seven Devils” / Florence & the Machine https://youtu.be/gErmFyIDeFM
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Date: 12/2/2020 11:19:00 PM
Simply wow! Superbly penned, poetess. /|\
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 12/3/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 11/2/2020 4:33:00 PM
In Nature, one sees the ferocity of the female in protecting her young-- even when it is against the larger more powerful male of the same species. I get that connection in your new poem. That sometimes internal rage overcomes even a greater opposing force! Where --HEART triumphs! God bless..
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/2/2020 11:02:00 PM
hmmm the playing board of Life. This poem does not include a King for a specific reason. I respect Women who respect women. A strong mother (biological mother) - will do almost anything for her child/ren. Some great sacrifices are made usually. This is the way it goes. There comes a time though, when the mother (as a woman) will put herself first and foremost on that playing board of Life. The game may seem long, but in truth, it is very short.
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Date: 11/2/2020 10:16:00 PM
Yet the queens have at the start equal power. It is only with the combinations of other pieces that the queen gains advantage. The king in an endgame with no queens on board can become a formidable fighting piece. Especially so in king and pawn endings, even if rooks are still on board. I play deep long-range tactics in openings, ever looking to find deeper strategic advantages to exploit. Yet in life, the female(queen) can easily if so equipped with beauty /brains have an advantage over the king- (man). That due to genetics and sexual drive impulse in which often the advantage of making the man blind. Beauty thus oft can defeat a greater power. I do not fear women, I respect them and understand they are not as weak as many men think that they are. Chess or life both have similarities.
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/2/2020 10:01:00 PM
Truth, my noble Bard, is often stranger than fiction. There can only be one Queen on the playing board that wins, the other one is an interloper, the great pretender, this is not a battle between male and female. I am a strategic player. As for playing against a male, ”The king may rule the kingdom, but it’s the queen who moves the board." There was never a King in this game, a fallen rook perhaps. Perhaps I should have titled this ode, The Waiting Game. Truth triumphs, Hearts win.
Date: 11/2/2020 4:27:00 PM
I do so simply adore this new gem of yours. As a chess player, one that has been moving the pieces since age 10, this finely crafted piece awes me in its beauty, depth of thought, and connecting of man's plight in life, this world and that of the abstract battles waged upon the chessboard! I play chess. I recently watched "The Queens Gambit on Netflix", and thought it to be a magnificent offering- as is your new gem. A fav...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/2/2020 9:57:00 PM
I don't play Chess but I understand it implicitly.
Date: 10/29/2020 2:49:00 AM
“You do not follow me because I am the strongest. Pax is. You do not follow me because I am the brightest. Mustang is. You follow me because you do not know where you are going. I do.”
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Date: 10/24/2020 12:33:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/tsundoku_tower_971465
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Date: 10/26/2020 1:51:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/understood_1261192
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/24/2020 12:34:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/fatal_attraction_1030509
Date: 10/24/2020 12:24:00 PM
your intellect is impressive dear poet, I'm not usually impressed...when I am there is a good reason and I find in you a worthy mind to be impressed by...your poetry stimulates my mind which is usually dormant when I read poetry on any given site, I would like to say I'm in awe but I won't, I'll just say you are one of a kind dear poet and raise a toast to you...
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/24/2020 12:37:00 PM
Intellect is a poor substitute for intelligence and a deep, dark hole one cannot tout as a fine quality to have over that of common sense. The ability to see the worth of a semblance of structure (tight, loose, or otherwise), in a story unfolding, is a beautiful gift. I am reading many stories unfolding here outside of this profile. I salute you Parker, as you are one of the best Sonnet writers in this place. This said, from a place of 'security'. x
Date: 10/23/2020 6:38:00 PM
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/23/2020 8:54:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/when_you_find_me_1199850
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Date: 10/23/2020 6:43:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1suUHTGyyVA
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Date: 10/23/2020 6:38:00 PM
https://genius.com/Taylor-swift-this-is-me-trying-lyrics
Date: 10/23/2020 6:30:00 PM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_true_mother_1165956
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Date: 10/23/2020 6:23:00 PM
Just finished watching The Queens Gambit on Netflix..very good Modesty
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 10/23/2020 6:30:00 PM
Not bad. You should read his other books. Movie versions not bad as well. Regards, The Woman Who Fell to Earth.

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