The Former Wings

***This poem was written at a hard 
time in my life when I needed my
spirituality most, but could not 
easily do so due to the death of
family; I fortunately realised that
only my mental state had changed,
not my spirit and love of life***

I had once plunged headlong 
to that darling place, 
that gallant tease that exists 
still;
Gilded-Golden Hill,
not wasting the thrill of chase
and pall bearer blues,
I flew

Death hid away to darkest wit,
mocking the none still thrift
and lit the lamp of decay ---
no more, and poor ---
so poorly my bones made way,
little money little to say,
but gladly, sadly?
give me my day

What is it? which numbs
that taketh away ray and hues
and gladly sun,
warm-shiver hugs, love?

We are not there and despair,
to part unfair ----
we see grey-pale everywhere
and longing for death,
life ----
(illumes the former wings still)


Written and antholigized in 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/3/2017 11:09:00 PM
Very insightful poem and the flow is amazing.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 2/4/2017 11:02:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed this one Afzal, the flow is good yes and the poem is a bit unique as per my usual.
Date: 1/29/2017 12:48:00 PM
In your youth and creativity now, spread your wings and soar. Go deeper into your soul and keep on writing gems such as this.. A7
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Date: 1/24/2017 2:39:00 PM
Nice ending! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/24/2017 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Matt. Ironic you mentioned the ending; when I finished all but the last line '-- I was lIke --gosh, how do I bring light into this?
Date: 1/24/2017 12:49:00 PM
Very deep and thought provoking my friend. Happy to hear you spirit and love of life are intact.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/24/2017 9:35:00 PM
Many thanks Chris(!) It was a hard time yet --- tis true 'The flesh is weak but the spirit is willing'...I do believe poetry is therapeutic, very much so; it helped to feel hope again
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