The Former Wings

***This poem was written at a hard 
time in my life when I needed my
spirituality most, but could not 
easily do so due to the death of
family; I fortunately realised that
only my mental state had changed,
not my spirit and love of life***

I had once plunged headlong 
to that darling place, 
that gallant tease that exists 
still;
Gilded-Golden Hill,
not wasting the thrill of chase
and pall bearer blues,
I flew

Death hid away to darkest wit,
mocking the none still thrift
and lit the lamp of decay ---
no more, and poor ---
so poorly my bones made way,
little money little to say,
but gladly, sadly?
give me my day

What is it? which numbs
that taketh away ray and hues
and gladly sun,
warm-shiver hugs, love?

We are not there and despair,
to part unfair ----
we see grey-pale everywhere
and longing for death,
life ----
(illumes the former wings still)


Written and antholigized in 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Very insightful poem and the flow is amazing.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 4, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Glad you enjoyed this one Afzal, the flow is good yes and the poem is a bit unique as per my usual.
Lindley Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 12:48 PM
In your youth and creativity now, spread your wings and soar. Go deeper into your soul and keep on writing gems such as this.. A7
Anish Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 2:39 PM
Nice ending! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 9:39 PM
Thanks Matt. Ironic you mentioned the ending; when I finished all but the last line '-- I was lIke --gosh, how do I bring light into this?
Green Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 12:49 PM
Very deep and thought provoking my friend. Happy to hear you spirit and love of life are intact.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Many thanks Chris(!) It was a hard time yet --- tis true 'The flesh is weak but the spirit is willing'...I do believe poetry is therapeutic, very much so; it helped to feel hope again
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