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The Forest

I so love an amber hazy forest and strolling the winding paths bathed in bright colors I love the fallen leaves of crimson and rust the bird twitters and peeps- oh, such sweet callers flying is a fire bird who is quite a scarlet charmer oh, the forest is full of wonder and sights and the the smell of dark umber earth delights deep in shadows I find a saffron crocus a yellow that only grows in autumn and not far ginger grows in the cool shade I think this was once a garden quite winsome now I find, trailing vines with pumpkins so tired, I close my eyes and breathe in the sun leaning on a tree with bark the color of cinnamon __________________________________________________ September 11, 2017- Edit and Repost February 21, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/The Forest Copyright Protected ID 09-1331-191-11 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Submitted to the Standard contest, All Yours (Feb 23) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/23/2021 First Place

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Date: 2/24/2021 9:01:00 AM
Very emotive and descriptive winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 2/24/2021 1:17:00 PM
Sara, thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate a lot _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" I am walking with you. Have a blessed day...........
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2021 8:45:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 6:39:00 AM
Beautiful, Constance. Congrats on your well deserved win ~
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2021 8:45:00 AM
Line, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/22/2021 5:01:00 AM
Your imagery traipsed my mind into autumn. Lovely!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2021 3:06:00 PM
Caren, thanks for the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 2/21/2021 1:45:00 PM
"deep in shadows I find a saffron crocus a yellow that only grows in autumn" How beautifully descriptive vocabulary! To my faves. Feels like I am there! Love ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2021 2:49:00 PM
Mala, thanks for the lovely comment on my poem and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 2/21/2021 12:17:00 PM
What a delightful piece of work! I strolled with you. I saw the crocus, the vines with pumpkins, and I leaned on tree, too. With such wonderful imagery you have drawn the reader into your experience.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2021 1:08:00 PM
Milton, thank for the compliment on my poem and for the lovely comment, appreciate so much _Constance

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