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The Fog of War

The Fog of War Our foes wait in their well-defended lair, Imagining that they’ll stay safe and warm. Our siege cannons thunder; smoke mists the air. While thinking of barricades each must storm, All my soldiers ready their arms to bear. Bugles sound: Battalions! Companies! Form! Once over the walls, we’ll know what’s in store. It’s hard to see through misty fogs of war. Mark Halliday/Warrior Poet Through the mist contest 19 August 2014

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Date: 8/31/2014 10:46:00 PM
you bring a classic touch to this piece and set the mood with such fervor, mark.. thank you for gracing my contest and congrats!
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Mark:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/20/2014 11:46:00 AM
Mark, Excellent portrait of battle. Perfect imagery. best of luck in the contest. Jim
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:37:00 AM
Great imagery and a nice approach to the theme, Mark
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:15:00 AM
Brilliant take with this one Mark! Theme chosen is perfect! Best wishes!
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Date: 8/19/2014 4:47:00 PM
great imagery Mark good luck in the contest - I've never attempted this form -Hugs Jan xxx
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