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The Fog Dawns

My husband cannot see the fog rising. Smiling, he takes a picture and the fog dawns on me. hubby’s cell phone image: no fog in sight his photo rightly clear then the fog dawns on me

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Constance La France

Date: 4/1/2022 12:20:00 PM

Reason, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your poem ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2022 3:32:00 PM

what a cool play on words, Reason. Congrats for the win.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/30/2022 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Reason! As you say better late than never! Nice going!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/30/2022 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/28/2022 7:28:00 PM

Great and very interesting. Congratulations!

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/29/2022 5:57:00 AM

I see why I see fog and he doesn't, making an eye appointment soon. thanks for the comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2022 1:36:00 PM

Great lines Reason, many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/29/2022 5:57:00 AM

thanks, Jan.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/25/2022 1:54:00 PM

Best wishes for the contest, Reason. Vey nice.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 3/29/2022 5:59:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, it was a late entry; but better late than not at all. Will check with my eye doctor for help.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/24/2022 9:31:00 PM

love your last line :)