Reason A. Poteet Poet Kimo

The Fog Dawns

My husband cannot see the fog rising.
Smiling, he takes a picture
and the fog dawns on me.

hubby’s cell phone image: no fog in sight      
his photo rightly clear
then the fog dawns on me

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Constance La France April 1, 2022 at 12:20 PM Reason, congratulations on your win in my Kimo contest with your poem ~Constance

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2022 at 3:32 PM what a cool play on words, Reason. Congrats for the win.

Sam Kauffman March 30, 2022 at 12:44 PM Congratulations on your win Reason! As you say better late than never! Nice going!

Paula Goldsmith March 30, 2022 at 10:28 AM Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Christuraj Alex March 28, 2022 at 7:28 PM Great and very interesting. Congratulations! Reason A. Poteet March 29, 2022 at 5:57 AM I see why I see fog and he doesn't, making an eye appointment soon. thanks for the comment.

Jan Allison March 28, 2022 at 1:36 PM Great lines Reason, many congrats in your win:-) hugs Jan xx Reason A. Poteet March 29, 2022 at 5:57 AM thanks, Jan.

Sam Kauffman March 25, 2022 at 1:54 PM Best wishes for the contest, Reason. Vey nice. Reason A. Poteet March 29, 2022 at 5:59 AM Thanks, Sam, it was a late entry; but better late than not at all. Will check with my eye doctor for help.

Eve Roper March 24, 2022 at 9:31 PM love your last line :)