The Fog

The fog hugged tight the street lamp light
Like two lovers in a country lane
To be outdoors on such a night
It makes your eyes to strain

To try to make out ghostly shapes
Of flitting furtive figures
It seems beneath the fog hugged light
These figures just seem bigger

The horn sounds out from river boat
Like an elephant about to charge
Its eerie tone warns other boats
Here comes the long coal barge

How far the sound it travels
On the foggy evening air
The dampness fills our nostrils
And forms a layer upon our hair

The cars proceed with caution
While pedestrians weave to and fro
Dancing almost as they walk
In the lamp lights eerie glow

Then as quickly as it had arrived
The dense fog sets us free
And once again our straining eyes
Can now quite clearly see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Curtis Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Brillant-----Just Billant--------no pun intended---lol It's such a joy to read your rhymes
Lyle Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Thank you Jerry for your kind words. I am glad you like my rhymes. It is an old form of poetry nowadays but thats how they leave me. have tried a few different types but always go back to rhyme, it must be in my blood. Andy
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 3:22 AM
I like that cold close feeling that you have caught here. Not so sure about you use of "seems/seem" in two consecutive lines though.
Lyle Avatar
March 6, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Scott for your review did not notice it when I wrote it but now you have mentioned it i could have a look at it. thanks for popping by Andy
Duggan Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Terrific write Robert, I remember when I went to UK from Oz and saw fog for the first time in my life, it was horrible but I put up with it for 5 years, you wrote exactly as it was. Thank you.....Vera.
Lyle Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Thank you Vera they have cleaned up the pollution levels so we don't get smog a lot.. Thank you for your kind comments, regards to Peter. Andy
Bauer Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 7:18 PM
wow! you've really painted such a vivid picture here! i could feel every image with all my senses. well done!
Lyle Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 12:03 PM
thank you Ilene for your kind comments glad you enjoyed my scribbles. Andy
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