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The Fog

The fog hugged tight the street lamp light Like two lovers in a country lane To be outdoors on such a night It makes your eyes to strain To try to make out ghostly shapes Of flitting furtive figures It seems beneath the fog hugged light These figures just seem bigger The horn sounds out from river boat Like an elephant about to charge Its eerie tone warns other boats Here comes the long coal barge How far the sound it travels On the foggy evening air The dampness fills our nostrils And forms a layer upon our hair The cars proceed with caution While pedestrians weave to and fro Dancing almost as they walk In the lamp lights eerie glow Then as quickly as it had arrived The dense fog sets us free And once again our straining eyes Can now quite clearly see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2014 5:52:00 PM
Brillant-----Just Billant--------no pun intended---lol It's such a joy to read your rhymes
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/21/2014 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Jerry for your kind words. I am glad you like my rhymes. It is an old form of poetry nowadays but thats how they leave me. have tried a few different types but always go back to rhyme, it must be in my blood. Andy
Date: 3/5/2014 3:22:00 AM
I like that cold close feeling that you have caught here. Not so sure about you use of "seems/seem" in two consecutive lines though.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/6/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thank you Scott for your review did not notice it when I wrote it but now you have mentioned it i could have a look at it. thanks for popping by Andy
Date: 2/26/2014 7:02:00 PM
Terrific write Robert, I remember when I went to UK from Oz and saw fog for the first time in my life, it was horrible but I put up with it for 5 years, you wrote exactly as it was. Thank you.....Vera.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 3/2/2014 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Vera they have cleaned up the pollution levels so we don't get smog a lot.. Thank you for your kind comments, regards to Peter. Andy
Date: 2/25/2014 7:18:00 PM
wow! you've really painted such a vivid picture here! i could feel every image with all my senses. well done!
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 2/26/2014 12:03:00 PM
thank you Ilene for your kind comments glad you enjoyed my scribbles. Andy

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