The Flying Scotsman

Big Ben strikes ten, depart Kings Cross.
Squeal of tight wheel, where lines criss-cross.
Clickety-clack. Clickety clack.
Now heading north-bound on fast track.

Leave city sprawl in grey and grime 
for now we're on East Coast mainline 
in rural space, expanse of green,
where all around, countryside scene.

My window view is flashing by,
too fast for focus of my eye.
Field after field, farming landscape.
Golden barley, bright yellow rape.

Wood with coppice, hedge and hawthorn.
Few grazing sheep looking forlorn.
On steep hillside, deserted farm,
red-brick decay falling down barn. 

Whistle warning, speed through stations, 
each one gone in just two seconds.
Now reach Yorkshire where engine built.
Accelerating to full tilt.

Non-stop on straight, all clear ahead.
And now we hit the full hundred.
Still at top speed and close to coast.
Through industry, of the North East.

Now parallel to Roman road, 
to Edinburgh with full payload.
We're nearly there and right on time.
Now slowing down for station line.

Clickety-clack. Clickety-clack.
Over the points to platform track.
Arrive on time in the city, 
the clock showing just six thirty.

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Date: 2/28/2021 4:14:00 PM
Hello Tony … what an interesting journey and verse to describe it. Steam trains bring plenty of nostalgia but of course pollution upsets a few - thank you Tony - Lindsay
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 3/1/2021 11:48:00 AM
Hi Lindsay. The engine named Flying Scotsman (built in Yorkshire in 1923) did a great job. And it toured Australia and USA. It is still working doing excursions. Steam locos are in the past. Now we go electric. A greener world. Cleaner, quieter, cheaper. But less exciting. Best wishes. Tony.
Date: 2/26/2021 7:37:00 AM
What an incredible piece of engineering it is Tony, its been around for as long as I can remember. Is it still in use, wouldn't surprise me if it is, back in the day they made things to last. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Tony Hargreaves
Date: 2/26/2021 10:33:00 AM
Many thanks for your comment. Yes, it's still running after nearly a hundred years service. Was built at Doncaster in 1923. But now only does special trips operated by tour companies. It lives at National Railway Museum. Well cared for and kept in working condition. Best wishes. Tony
Date: 2/26/2021 6:00:00 AM
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Date: 2/26/2021 10:40:00 AM
Hi Vernon. Yes. Much nostalgia about this steam loco. Built in 1923 and still working, part time, for a living. Best wishes. Tony.
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