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The Flower That Survived

There once was a flower Blooming beautifully and happily Brilliant and mighty Just the sight alone, brought a smile One day, when I looked The flower lost its petals Lost its brilliancy and power The sight was all crooked I tried watering more Offering more sunshine But no matter what I did It was all in vain Then one day, a thought hit me I took the flower Placed it somewhere else And waited To my surprise The flower showed hints of curiosity It started blooming Lifting her petals in hopes Miraculously within a few days The flower was blooming again As if nothing happened Strong and more brilliant than before

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/28/2016 8:05:00 AM

May SARA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 8:49:00 AM

awesome write.. SKAT

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/25/2015 1:20:00 PM

There is a hidden meaning in all of this, if life isn't as we would like, do we move ourselves to another place and start again ...Seren

May Sara
Date: 5/25/2015 5:15:00 PM

Another place, another environment, another hobby, another something.. just try and maybe it clicks.. surprisingly you will feel better, enjoy again and forget what you left...