May Sara Poet Blank verse

The Flower That Survived

There once was a flower
Blooming beautifully and happily 
Brilliant and mighty
Just the sight alone, brought a smile

One day, when I looked
The flower lost its petals
Lost its brilliancy and power
The sight was all crooked

I tried watering more
Offering more sunshine
But no matter what I did
It was all in vain

Then one day, a thought hit me
I took the flower 
Placed it somewhere else
And waited

To my surprise 
The flower showed hints of curiosity
It started blooming
Lifting her petals in hopes

Miraculously within a few days
The flower was blooming again
As if nothing happened
Strong and more brilliant than before

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Poet Destroyer A February 28, 2016 at 8:05 AM May SARA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A January 7, 2016 at 8:49 AM awesome write.. SKAT

Seren Roberts May 25, 2015 at 1:20 PM There is a hidden meaning in all of this, if life isn't as we would like, do we move ourselves to another place and start again ...Seren May Sara May 25, 2015 at 5:15 PM Another place, another environment, another hobby, another something.. just try and maybe it clicks.. surprisingly you will feel better, enjoy again and forget what you left...