The Flower

a downcast face stares at the curlicues forming symbols he loves me petals grow upon the flower

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Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 10/22/2012 10:33:00 PM

How sweet...Love, Hanitra

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/19/2012 4:40:00 AM

I noticed this poem a few days ago Debbie, And I was quite taken by its flow.. Also the unique way you have expressed yourself with wording I consider this nothing short of brilliant..! Also Thank you for your kind words on my last poem Yours Joe..)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/15/2012 6:52:00 PM

Great Tanka!! Perfection my dear Debbie. xoxox Michael

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/14/2012 8:52:00 AM

The Flower - is a good tanka. Thanks for sharing. Lucy

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/14/2012 5:49:00 AM

He loves me not, i always got that one, when my fav aunt, use to pull off the petals, but she always cheated so i would get 'she love me' wow i digress, from your awesome Tanka, glad i came....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/13/2012 11:49:00 AM

A poem I like very much, lovely. - Have a beautiful weekend Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 10/12/2012 7:12:00 AM

Debbie great image, ...David

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/11/2012 4:08:00 PM

‡ This Is Beautiful, But Even More Amazing And Beautiful Is The Sudden Emotions That Rise From Nowhere To Deeply Stir Inside Ones Veins At The Sight Of Another, Beautiful Debbie. I Love Heart I Find Inside These Lines; Stirring, To Love Anothers Priceless Heart. I Am Going Fave This Beautiful Poetic Jewel. Love, Rachel ‡