The Floating Island

Most of the time hidden from sight
surrounded by densely thick mist
the island had evolved differently
it was a place of tranquillity

No human foot had ever stepped on it
coral white sands gleaned and sparkled
palm trees waved their stately branches
multi coloured parrots swung amidst the fronds

Their harsh but cheerful cries filled the air
below roamed mystical unicorns and even a phoenix
happily cavorting on emerald green plains
while busy monkeys chittered in the dense forests

Geysers shot scalding waters in high plumes
keeping the island at tropical heat
a natural barrier reef surrounding it
strange as soon as you crossed the reef

All signs of the fog disappeared
leaving the island in plain view
here there had never been a shot fired
the wild inhabitants knew no fear of man

Ever changing latitude and longitude
the island drifted from place to place
a paradise totally unspoilt by time or man
mariners whispered of its existence

Yet on no maps did it ever appear
wrapped safe in its shrouding mists
every century it would briefly appear
never emerging in the same place twice

As it floated the ocean currents
sometimes to the far bitterly cold north
then it would be briefly spotted in the east
the island kept its secrets safe from mankind


written 02/23/2014

contest  Islands sponsor Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/15/2014 10:03:00 AM
Shadow, .. Congratulations on Anthony's Island contest. ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/11/2014 7:31:00 PM
Sounds like paradise! Congrad's on your Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2014 7:46:00 PM
ty Debbie hugs
Date: 3/10/2014 6:40:00 PM
congrats on your win Shadow
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Date: 3/11/2014 3:43:00 AM
ty Frederic hugs
Date: 3/10/2014 5:38:00 PM
Wow! A wonderful tale you've weaved in this verse. I hope no man steps foot on this island. You can be sure it would be spoiled of its beauty. Congratulations Shadow on your well deserved win - Connie
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Date: 3/11/2014 3:42:00 AM
so kind of you Connie ty hugs
Date: 3/10/2014 12:59:00 PM
This is amazing! Congrats on your placement!
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Date: 3/10/2014 3:05:00 PM
ty Deb hugs
Date: 3/10/2014 7:41:00 AM
What an idea..mystery ....congrats. BG
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:45:00 AM
ty BG hugs
Date: 2/28/2014 9:10:00 PM
Thank u so much for bringing me into this island through your stunning poem my dear friend Shadow. Kudos! I enjoyed this awesome poem so much. Thank u so much as well for enjoying and commenting one of my poems. Have a great wkend to you and your loved ones! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/10/2014 7:08:00 AM
hi Leonora sry for slow reply I have not been well and am just catching up ty for your lovely remarks hugs
Date: 2/23/2014 9:57:00 AM
Wow Shadow, thanks for the ticket! it was mesmerizing! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:58:00 PM
ty Chuck very much appreciated hugs
Date: 2/23/2014 8:36:00 AM
A creative concept Shadow. Sounds wonderful.
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:59:00 PM
hi Rick ty dear hugs
Date: 2/23/2014 6:12:00 AM
This is a brilliant idea for the contest my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have inspired me by the tenderness of this mysterious island! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/23/2014 7:59:00 AM
ty Russell memories from a book I read when I was about 10 lol ty hugs
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