The Flight of the Moonbee

(Hey, Moonbee! Wait up!...)

You're visiting friends on Titan I hear?
My starship's broke down (In the shop I fear)
Wow...SATURN'S a long FLIGHT
Hitch a ride? Well ALRIGHT!
Could you drop me off at the moon, my dear?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 22, 2009 at 11:13 PM
:o) Delightful piece, Tim! Lucky MoonBee! I'll just catch a ride on the afterburn, I guess!Hugs, Donna
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 2:43 PM
so sweet! Light & Love
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November 22, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Timmy, (LOL) Boy... Now, You Know, If I Fly You To The Moon... You'll Have To Dance With Me Among The Stars! (God, Who Sings That One? I Forgot (smile) ... But I'll Be Singing Yours For Sure ... Love It Timmy, Just Love It! Oh and On This Flight, We'll Be Drinking Cosmos, White-Lightning and the Ever Favorite of Mine ... "MoonShine" hehehehe Ha!... Poet-Gal-Pal ... MoonBee
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November 22, 2009 at 7:38 AM
Such a creative poem and MoonBee is a delightful poet.. nice tribute to her from your creative pen... luv .. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" Is there another flight leaving soon?
Goff Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 11:11 PM
fun tribute to a fine souper! Tim!!! jimbo
Arteaga Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 2:31 PM
this is a fun poem! I must look up this Moonbee!
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November 21, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Oh! I had no idea there is a writer named MoonBee! How fun! I'll have to run and visit as this is such a wonderful tribute! Tim, I thought you were headed to the moon with a honeybee or something! lol! Back to read more later. Off to work now. :)
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November 21, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Moonbee will enjoy this. What a wonderful tribute. Has me smiling. Thank you for sharing this day brightener with us. Karen
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November 21, 2009 at 11:03 AM
Great write in honor of a great poet. Moonbee will love this, Tim. Great tempo and a creative, astral expedition in this poem! I hope you are enjoying your weekend. All aboard! Love you, Carolyn
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November 21, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Tim! Hey it's me! Tuned up the scooter at the Automezzi so we're all set! I got a spot in the custom front seat! Grab a cup of coffee... some tunes maybe and we'll be on our way. :) Saturn IS a long dayz... drive. I might just decide to hang at the moon with you a while... you mind? ;) I love this little write of yours, dear and appreciate your kind comments very much!
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