The Flight of Her Muse

Distant thunder put her in a pensive mood, and the rain gave her
 muse the wings to fly. The words flowed from her pen and flooded
 the page with metaphors that drizzled with beauty. Through the misty 
 window she could barely see the cars driving by, but her muse was 
 speeding along. She paused as thunder roared once more.

 raindrop metaphors
 fell upon her fertile page
 blooming like roses

 In this brief interlude her thoughts fell upon a distant memory.
 It was the time she was all alone in the house during a thunderstorm.
 At the tender age of ten, the thunder scared her and she'd hide under
the bed. There she'd imagine fire breathing dragons roaring outside.
 Spewing fire across the sky, A predator of the storm.
 When the storm ended she held on to these enchanting tales.....
  Then the lights dimmed as dragon's fire flashed across the window.

 distant memories
 of long ago storms, ended
 the flight of her muse
 7/21/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sands Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations for the win Joseph ...# 1! Yay :)
May Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Heidi
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 10:46 AM
She must have been watching Game Of Thrones. well done Joseph, congratulations.
May Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:09 PM
Thank you Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Joseph, I love how her thoughts mingle with the storm! A superb write! I love storms! Congrats! <3 Kim
May Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Kim
Daniel Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 8:15 AM
I liked this haibun, Joseph, fantabulous :)
May Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Jo
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:18 PM
wow, those distant memories were very powerful to stop her flight of the muse. This is very nice, JOseph. Good luck. I entered an oldie. I am not so good at this form.
May Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Thank you Andrea...hugs
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 6:53 AM
I also am not aware of this form, but you have done extremely well at it Joseph. I really enjoyed The Flight of her Muse...Maria
May Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you Maria
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Creative moments captured with pen and ink..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
May Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thank you Sara
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 7:30 PM
I really enjoyed this Joseph...those haiku are great on their own
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Tim
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July 21, 2017 at 2:56 PM
- A wonderful poem, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Thank you Anne
Sands Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 2:17 PM
I don't know this form Joseph, but this poem is amazing and another favorite for me :)
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Thank you for making it a fave Heidi
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:39 AM
That's right, blame it on the muse:) I respect their power but I love the thunder and lightening. Tough form but you have done well, Joseph. Good luck!
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Thank you Daniel, no it's the thunder that's to blame
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:07 AM
Wonderful theme, Joseph, very well told. Best in the contest... Already a winner... As old as I am I still react to Lighting and Thunder. ~*
May Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Thank you Eve,
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