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The Flight of Evil Thoughts

Twas’ a war full of foul language, Whether it be said aloud or kept hidden in the minds, In the minds of politicians, soldiers, and citizens. The language, Is directed towards the flight of democracy, And the descent of communism, Now we may blindlessly go along with the current trajectory, But today I do not conform, For today I lift my voice aloud, In the pursuit to end the needless bloodshed. To let the President execute, His own agenda, Is like letting a man with a checkers background, Dictate the strategies of a chess match. As a soldier I leave my loved ones. I am forced to fight people who have never harmed me. I don’t wish to, I don’t ask to, I am forced to by those who are higher above. Ignorance has no place neither here nor there, For that is a statement all men, Whether they speak foul or nah can agree upon. How many lives need be forgotten before the toll to pay is too high? How much destruction must ensue in Vietnam before the ignorance may be revealed? The endless bombardment of artillery must flutter through our nightmares before we realize. We stand united in the thought, That sending men, Sending them to spread our ideals, Will make others “better”, But we fail to acknowledge the inhumanity of the actions. Man may never remove itself from the cycle of destruction, But there is still hope, For the morality of the silent, Whether they be the majority or nay, Will ALWAYS overcome the austerity of the situation. May we fly above the cruelty of mankind, And into the nest of peace and unity, And Fly away from the Evils of the Vietnam War.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/26/2016 8:24:00 AM
Hi Sarah,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/26/2016 8:09:00 AM
Very good for a rant, Sarah,, well done, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *skat*
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Date: 6/26/2016 5:48:00 AM
This is great...and remind us of the past evil deeds...Welcome. :)
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Date: 6/26/2016 4:37:00 AM
SS, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 6/26/2016 3:19:00 AM
boss poem
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