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The Flight

I won't have to build a spaceship One will be provided for me It will have all the luxury That anyone could need I will go flying and instantly Be where I will meet the King Up in the third heaven where There the Royal One is supreme God has a city that he's built four square With streets of gold shining And walls of Jasper fair It outshines any palace I'll have a mansion prepared That for my personality sings A song that is matched perfectly For he's my omnificent King

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/25/2009 4:25:00 PM
WOW! I assumed this was abour planes but when I read it it is far from that in fact very far, I wish to fly too Bless you
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Date: 12/24/2009 6:43:00 PM
Hey, I didn't catch that in your poem, what Dane Ann asked about. Are you Mormon? Yes, this should be in the contest. Andrea
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Date: 12/24/2009 11:38:00 AM
Sara, this is a very well written heartfelt poem about the concept of Heaven and salvation. I am particularly interested in your idea(s) about the third heaven. I know of a church that teaches about three degrees of glory or three heavens. From whence is your concept? Excellent write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/24/2009 8:27:00 AM
Great words for an entry in Matt's contest if u so choose ... and I have the same case scenario with being raised as an only child yet I have siblings also.. brother in Pittsburgh ..sister, don't know... but I feel special having been raised with luv and faith from my dear MOM who was an avid Church going woman... we were best friends too... enjoyed reading this today Sara... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 12/24/2009 8:03:00 AM
Beautiful piece you have penned here Sara. Powerful message. Thanks so much for sharing. Many thanks too for taking the time to read my works and your kind comments are much appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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