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The Flavor of Our Love

The flavor of our love 

Bright within the sunrise sherbet
where apricot reveals the sky,
the sweet harvest of morning
drips from your dawning smile
as I kiss the taste from 
cinnamon cream lips,
enjoying the ambrosial flavor 
of our love

Good morning Soupers

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Lisa Ricci Date: 5/28/2017 8:47:00 AM Morning Mr. Chris. So let it be said. So let it be written. So let it be done. This entry is a precious little gem. Even in brevity you manage to speak. Have a wonderful morning. Fabulous title by the way with the exact enhancements of sherbet and cinnamon. How grand is that in the world of love and a moment in time. Very Well done entirely. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/29/2017 9:00:00 AM Thank you so very much my friend. I so appreciate you taking the time to read my work and for leaving such wonderful comments for me to find. Lisa...thank you. :)

Maria Williams Date: 5/27/2017 9:25:00 PM Intimate moments flavored by cinnamon cream to enhance your love. Sounds simply delicious Chris...... Maria7 Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/29/2017 8:59:00 AM Thank you my friend for all of your kindness.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/25/2017 5:34:00 PM A delicious poem shaped like a heart! Love it! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 5:46:00 PM Thanks so very much Kim.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 5/25/2017 4:03:00 PM I keep thinking about this. what you've really captured is the intimacy of the moment. good job! perhaps our best work comes when we relinquish control and let the words write themselves. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 4:11:00 PM I think that is the an important aspect when expressing emotions. Thanks so much Dale.

Heidi Sands Date: 5/25/2017 12:24:00 PM oh so sweet! :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 12:34:00 PM Definitely sweet. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Lenna Walker Date: 5/25/2017 10:15:00 AM Good morning:) and thank you for this little piece of sunrise, it is cloudy here AGAIN today Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 10:49:00 AM It is my pleasure my friend. I am always happy if I help brighten your day Lenna.

Dale Gregory Cozart Date: 5/25/2017 9:02:00 AM I like this a lot. Judging by times of your responses everyone lives back east. I'm still waiting for coffee out here on the coast. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 9:19:00 AM I think a lot are, I am smack dab in the middle of it all in Texas. Thanks so much Dale.

Anne-Marie Coreggia Date: 5/25/2017 7:57:00 AM Bonjour, I see you are already savoring the day, and I have yet to have my coffee:) Amitiés Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 9:17:00 AM Well, what are you waiting for? :) Thanks my friend, that means a lot that you came to read me before you've had your coffee...I like that. :)

Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2017 7:56:00 AM The flavor of love...I better have a Mentos first...lol Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 9:16:00 AM Yeah, they do come in handy at times. :) Thank Tim.

Darren White Date: 5/25/2017 7:07:00 AM What a tasty way to wake up this morning :) But what on earth are creamscle bars? I always dream of the mocha eyes of my boyfriend! Lovely Chris. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2017 10:46:00 AM The have different flavors now...dreamsicles were my favorite Chris Green Date: 5/25/2017 9:16:00 AM Thanks so much my friend and I see Tim has answered your question sort of, allow me to embellish...And orange flavored popsicle with a vanilla ice milk center. We called them "dreamsicles" as kids. Darren White Date: 5/25/2017 8:53:00 AM Thanks Tim :) Tim Smith Date: 5/25/2017 8:00:00 AM A flavored popsicle with an ice milk center