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The Flavor of Our Love

The flavor of our love 

Bright within the sunrise sherbet
where apricot reveals the sky,
the sweet harvest of morning
drips from your dawning smile
as I kiss the taste from 
cinnamon cream lips,
enjoying the ambrosial flavor 
of our love

Good morning Soupers

good morningfree verse

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Lisa Ricci

May 28, 2017 at 8:47 AM

Morning Mr. Chris. So let it be said. So let it be written. So let it be done. This entry is a precious little gem. Even in brevity you manage to speak. Have a wonderful morning. Fabulous title by the way with the exact enhancements of sherbet and cinnamon. How grand is that in the world of love and a moment in time. Very Well done entirely.

Chris Green

May 29, 2017 at 9:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. I so appreciate you taking the time to read my work and for leaving such wonderful comments for me to find. Lisa...thank you. :)

Maria Williams

May 27, 2017 at 9:25 PM

Intimate moments flavored by cinnamon cream to enhance your love. Sounds simply delicious Chris...... Maria7

Chris Green

May 29, 2017 at 8:59 AM

Thank you my friend for all of your kindness.

Kim Rodrigues

May 25, 2017 at 5:34 PM

A delicious poem shaped like a heart! Love it!

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 5:46 PM

Thanks so very much Kim.

Dale Gregory Cozart

May 25, 2017 at 4:03 PM

I keep thinking about this. what you've really captured is the intimacy of the moment. good job! perhaps our best work comes when we relinquish control and let the words write themselves.

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 4:11 PM

I think that is the an important aspect when expressing emotions. Thanks so much Dale.

Heidi Sands

May 25, 2017 at 12:24 PM

oh so sweet! :)

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 12:34 PM

Definitely sweet. :) Thanks so much my friend.

Lenna Walker

May 25, 2017 at 10:15 AM

Good morning:) and thank you for this little piece of sunrise, it is cloudy here AGAIN today

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 10:49 AM

It is my pleasure my friend. I am always happy if I help brighten your day Lenna.

Dale Gregory Cozart

May 25, 2017 at 9:02 AM

I like this a lot. Judging by times of your responses everyone lives back east. I'm still waiting for coffee out here on the coast.

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 9:19 AM

I think a lot are, I am smack dab in the middle of it all in Texas. Thanks so much Dale.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

May 25, 2017 at 7:57 AM

Bonjour, I see you are already savoring the day, and I have yet to have my coffee:) Amitiés

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 9:17 AM

Well, what are you waiting for? :) Thanks my friend, that means a lot that you came to read me before you've had your coffee...I like that. :)

Tim Smith

May 25, 2017 at 7:56 AM

The flavor of love...I better have a Mentos first...lol

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 9:16 AM

Yeah, they do come in handy at times. :) Thank Tim.

Darren White

May 25, 2017 at 7:07 AM

What a tasty way to wake up this morning :) But what on earth are creamscle bars? I always dream of the mocha eyes of my boyfriend! Lovely Chris.

Tim Smith

May 25, 2017 at 10:46 AM

The have different flavors now...dreamsicles were my favorite

Chris Green

May 25, 2017 at 9:16 AM

Thanks so much my friend and I see Tim has answered your question sort of, allow me to embellish...And orange flavored popsicle with a vanilla ice milk center. We called them "dreamsicles" as kids.

Darren White

May 25, 2017 at 8:53 AM

Thanks Tim :)

Tim Smith

May 25, 2017 at 8:00 AM

A flavored popsicle with an ice milk center