The Flames of Love

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Tanka Triptych Three Tankas written for the contest Sponsored by John Anderson

Fuel~

that first knowing look
eyes meet, a warmth grows inside
you lay the kindling
trees beginning that old dance
laying stones to contain it

Heat~

strike sparks of desire
this heat grows into hot flames
keep adding the fuel
the dance that builds what then will
burn hot and settle, steady

Oxygen~

the flames may waver
blow on embers with kisses
they need constant care
flames burn hot with whispered words
tended love won’t extinguish

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Date: 9/1/2025 8:23:00 AM
This is a great set. I like how you give little titles to each. I am always sitting on my bed as hubbie sleeps. Otherwise I would play one of your songs!! He really sleeps a lot and I don't even own ear buds!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/1/2025 10:22:00 AM
Lol...I have a she shed thank God! Lol
Date: 8/22/2025 2:38:00 PM
So well crafted, Crystol. Indeed love needs the loving hand of oxygen to continue to grow and exist. Love your imagery of a fire with kindling, embers, flames, fuel. It is done with such a light yet impactful touch like the romance it is extolling! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
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Date: 8/20/2025 5:00:00 PM
Magnificent! Creative how how you subtitled each Tanka so appropriately yet they do entwine. Nicely done & best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/20/2025 5:39:00 PM
Oh wow! That's such a great word, Magnificent! Thanks so much for attributing it to this piece! Xoxo
Date: 8/20/2025 2:46:00 PM
Ooh so good. I like the way it builds. Oxygen keeps the flame a'goin
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/20/2025 5:40:00 PM
Such high praise Tom! Gracious mi amigo! ;) <3 xo
Date: 8/20/2025 1:31:00 PM
Enjoyed all three Tankas. Very nicely constructed, Crystol! I like the way you have laid it all out so each follows on from the other. Good stuff! :) john
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Crystol Woods
Date: 8/20/2025 5:41:00 PM
So glad you liked it and felt compelled to review! It means a lot! Xo
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