The Flamenco

Emotional tension fills the air...
 Lights and laughter everywhere

 A fiesta audience waits eagerly for a night of passion.

 The dance of Spain and a sensual dancer
 The Andalusian Gypsy dancer
 El baile flamenco tonight…Ole!

 The guitarist enters…masterfully
 Displaying his unique musical talent.
 His music controls the dance

 Finally, bailaoras, the great Camille, enters
 More than beautiful, she exudes sexuality
 Dramatically, her aura intrigues and mystifies

 The Flamenco, some say, is animalistic
 Elegant movements of the flamingo birds
 So, much like the dancer's stance…

 Camille points her gold slipper like a prima ballerina
 Music begins--- she does not move…poised as a statue
 The audience sits on the edges of their seats.

 Motionless, no expression in the start
 When she feels the rhythm, she responds
 Camille claps loudly, steadily

 As her emotions build, she begins…
 Her back, arched and dignified
 Arms elegant and poised

 The flamenco begins torridly
 Gracefully but fiercely, Camille stomps---
 Golden shoes with their percussion sounds

 Bedazzling her admirers,
 No one knows where the dance will go…
 That is part of the beauty of the flamenco

 Her passionate moves romance or comfort her admirers
 Thus, the greatest joy of flamenco dancing
 Climatically building as a heroine in a play 

 Camille has no equal…
 Astutely, the castanets click in her hands…
 The difficulty of the dance emerges…

 Hands and feet working not in synchronicity
 But against each other
 Her mother taught her well…

 The dancer is the accompanist, moving her body
 To the flying fingers of the guitarist.
 Ultimately, the music ebbs away 

 Camile picks up her fan and looks at the guitarist 
 Both dancer and musician are spent...
 Audience stands up, cheering and clapping.

 This is the spice of life in Spain!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/25/2017 11:43:00 AM
You have certainly done a great job with the theme and picture. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2017 7:18:00 PM
Beautifully written Carol. An entralling and passionate poem about an entralling and passionate dance. You certainly brought the painting to rhythmic life! Good luck in the contest!
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