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The Flame

She stares at the flames , At how they crack and whip in no known direction, She watches them dance In the wind, With no set path, She envies fire.. For it represents the freedom she desires... A tear escaped her eye, She reaches out but the flame dies Realizing that her own breathe killed the flame, She was always holding herself back... Killing the fire within her with her own fear, The fear dwelling in those damn tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/22/2015 11:02:00 AM
Hi Ileana! Just stumbled by accident on this poem, and I am very much impressed. You seek freedom, but it does not always come free of charge! // paul
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Date: 1/3/2014 12:17:00 PM
- Tears does not mean weakness. . . but shows emotions - a truly well written poem Ilenan. - Happy New Year! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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